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Poet's Pen (Part 4) (my 750th post)
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Poet's Pen (Part 4) (my 750th post) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Evening came And the song I heard It, It was lovely to listen the words, I remember the time had gone too soon, Sunshine will come after rain, And the flowers bloom, When showers comes In April, And rainbow In the sky, It wasn't easy for me, To tell you how much I love you, If I could tell you how much I love you, You would only see, A love Inside my heart, Only time will tell us, When you are near, Only time will tell us, When love Is there for us, Only time will tell us, What remains now, Our love has ened, Now you are gone, Here, All alone In the dark, What remains now, Take my heart, If you go away, Remember me with love, Don't forget To take my heart with you, |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vandana~ congrats on your 750th!  this is a very heart-felt poem, I liked it very much -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I was just wondering the other day if a woman that I like was thinking of me while we are apart...I was definately thinking of her...nice #750...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sea,Thank you!!!!!!! Jimelee12345,Thank you!!!!! This just a try out poem with my titles and success I put it on together!!!!!!!!Glad you liked it!!!!!!!!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Yes, I liked this a lot! -SEA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sea,Thank you for reading my poem!!!!!!!! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Very heartfelt and beautifully written. I felt joy at the beginning and then sorrow for the ending of love. My heart goes out to you, dear one. Wonderful poem for your 750th post. Gosh, it amazes me to even consider the numbers. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Vandana, This is just great, congratulations on 750, well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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