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Priest of My Thoughts
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Priest of My Thoughts |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX 
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Tension is building in my brain As I sit to have a cup of tea with The High Priest of Thought A man of wisdom beyond his years One who has managed to open my eyes again As I stare into his eyes I realize that he not only understands, but he cares too Someone who sees me for me, and is not afraid of it This person who seems to know all that I am thinking when I'm thinking it I search for knowledge all that lies in his head Yet curiousity killed the cat Still I don't fully understand what you have done to me Your words ring over and over in my ears My eyes watch your hands and glide up your body Such graceful movements that run shivers up my spine Mental torture Don't break me too hard Don't break me too fast When your done try to put me back together again Just please Please Don't leave me lonely... Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...and may I make that same request...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Tough guy that High Priest of Thought. But he'll treat you right because ... ============================================ ... he not only understands, but he cares too ============================================ Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Wonderful flow and feeling in this poem. I loved every word. Thank you so much for the read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a gem. It read like a book, I just wanted to get to the next line! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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modest mouse New Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 1 |
that sounds like one special guy... |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Thank you all for reading this. James I promise... Interloper, he is tough and sensitive. I never thought that could be. Startime and Irish Rose, I hope that I can get the sequel to this to be just as good as the first. we will just have to see where it goes. As for you Modest Mouse. you should know huh? LOL.. Welcome to Passions. Take your shoes off and stay with me for awhile. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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