Open Poetry #11 |
Poetry's Kaleidoscope |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
My poetry is gone so I must write some more It’s stacked up and piled up right out the door My pencil leads broken and dried is my pen I don’t write poetry; it writes me, the end I could never in delay stroke the starkest page With anything swooning but sophomoric rage Juxtaposition lights the fueled kaleidoscope Dipping through two streams and drawing some hope Instead of tomorrow, where the sun hasn’t shone I could be with you here where we share our's alone We could vow most tender, our thoughts of wonder And racing in time, two hearts crashing thunder Tomorrow clouds peak and today will be then My senses are sharp may they bleed from my pen Sometimes in moments of such clarity sought, A kiss from God’s lips from what poetry's taught Candelabras are lit by a short-lived candle The words for such hopes I never could handle So slipstream into the thoughts I now often dip By threads of the sun I take seat for my trip Am I so wise that I’m evicted from life Now slipping on pages that spill out my strife Kaleidoscopes break and oft marvels reveal Poetry thus writes me, so through it I feel [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-30-2000).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Kaleidoscopes break and oft marvels reveal Poetry thus writes me so through it I feel" Excellent writing... Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Wonderful, very well done. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Awesome....... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is an excellent way to learn how to feel...when first you are written by the words... WOW, soft wow... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanky yuh all! |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Who indeeds manipulates the pen, hand or paper |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
This was really good! *smiles* excellent! -Tier |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx dream and tiersdin woohoo! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This was pretty good, in fact excellent, yuh Write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you kethry big smiles |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You just amaze me Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Need I say you've always been amazing... But I caught a bit of your heart on your reply to Liz and another of your own... Hats off... deep bow... heart with only your style Walt... Your one of a kind my friend. Nice to see your heart... Woops... darn good write dale [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 11-30-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ 'Poetry thus writes me, so through it I'll feel' And that is a blessing for us all. Marvelous, just marvelous. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
paula thanky thanky dale your words warm me marge woohoo!! |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
You're not evicted just yet love. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love the kaleidoscope of poetry, wonderful penned. Charisma |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
So... are you saying that - You are your poetry... and your poetry is you??? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Charisma thanky Nan I yam what I yam |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
Your choice of words seem are very well planned and thought out! I find myself flipping through the dictionary when you talk and write. "Instead of tomorrow, where the sun hasn't shown" and "Tomorrow clouds peak and today will be then." These are very interesting pictures and a very peculiar thought process. The ending is seismic! There seems to be a lot of character between both your ears and these lines. Candelabras, kaleidoscope, juxtaposition and slipstream are cool choices. "A kiss from God's lips..." speaks 'Louder than love.' -and may your sense always bleed from your pen lader cruz |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
Walt you had some realy grate lines in this one. I loved the 3rd verse best. I think this pome is (SOMKEING) lol |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you cruz very much raliegh smiles to you |
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