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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Why does my heart ponder whenever I think of you? I guess the reason my mind wanders is for the same reason too Why do I feel your hand in mine as I walk alone in the park? the same reason I feel your lips at night alone in the dark Maybe I should forget you and in my heart be alone maybe I should let my heart turn into a cemetery stone.. Maybe I should release my feelings in the wind or drown them in the Sea and lock my heart forever but in my hand..a coral key. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-17-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I know this one, I think...trying to control the heart..whew... while I understand the inclination, I never mastered the ability myself. Hugs lady. and thank you for the read and ponder... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you serenity..glad you enjoyed..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Victoria, Tis' lonely out there I feel. Chin up and smile, the Angels are there. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
so sweet JD..and thank you for reminding me HUGS.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Doesn't sound to me like you have much of a choice, Victoria. You may be stuck with the feeling for a while.... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you deery..yep i think youre right. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I tried locking my heart away, didn't work for me either! Wonderfully done Victoria! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Because you can't shake all those things from your heart...your mind might want to but your heart won't let go.....nice tight rhythum and rhyme scheme well done!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Eddie..takes time just like everything else i guess..just have to be patient..  ethome..you know what they say mind over matter..one has to be strong.. Thanks Guys ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I'm glad I caught this on pages back because I'd like to keep this in library to read and look back... You know Victoria, this is such a softly written and tender poem of heart I really enjoyed it and I thank you for the sharing... coco |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
This is like a snap shot of where I once was. very good writing. Love and light, Richard |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This one makes my list of favourites! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
(((warm hugs)))...you expressed your feelings so well, hope you will feel better soon, especially with Christmas so near, these feelings becomes mostly stronger. take care my friend Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Coco..i was surprised to see this pop pop again this morning..thank you so much...i enjoyed writing it.. Richard..thank you pleased you enjoyed reading Eddie..well you must like it..the second time you responded ha..i wrote it in november ha..thanks Eddie.. you can stop by as many times as you wish ha Charisma..as i told eddie i wrote it in november although i could of wrote it today...HUGS and thank you Charisma. ~Victoria~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is sad Victoria...seems we all get our fair share of this...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
you are so right james...thank you for peeking in and reading.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Glad it popped back up. I miss so much if I don't come on for a day. Great poem, and the question..well you know how I feel.. S |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you sandra..yes i know you understand hon..nice to hear from you HUGS~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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