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It's Late
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It's Late |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
It’s Late Virginia Salter it’s late and apathy is trying to get an invitation not to mention hopelessness but I’m too busy doing other things thinking other thoughts they won’t get in not tonight my link to the outside world seems out of sync tonight like looking out the window seeing only shadows and blackness hearing only white noise in the distance as a rumble, a hum, a numb ear listens cyberspace old words await in messages messages sent days ago and, as if captured in a bottle, they wait silently within the choices one might take to awake the nobleness of the heart and in tenderness of spirit to read, to see, to feel to understand © November 12, 2000 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
VAS~ "cyberspace old words await in messages messages sent days ago and, as if captured in a bottle, they wait silently" Wow....this is incredible!  -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
The things that inspire us in those late hours. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Wonderful, how true and how very well you have written it. Thank you so very much for the read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is such a cool poem, you have captured the sometimes lonely feeling late at night..sitting at the computer.. so often we fill our needs with cybertime when "real" contact is not around us excellent writing take care jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Boy, can I relate to this one! You have wrtten these thoughts out so clearly they glide through the beauty of cyberspace  |
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