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. . . Heavenly, yes, stellar embodiment . . .
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. . . Heavenly, yes, stellar embodiment . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Merry, smiling, beautiful eyes that are Intent, yet roguish in their merriment. Ceaselessly sparkling, lovely pools. A far, Heavenly, yes, stellar embodiment. Ethereal beauty I could drown in Lest I take great care. Soft and soothing, your Eyes hold me in their tender grasp. No sin, May I say, for your gaze seems to explore, Yet concurrently caress my being. Blessed by your look I am a captive, Ever in your service, to be seeing Limitless horizons and be active, Like a friendship should. Together we will Experience life 'til we've had our fill. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Like a friendship should. Together we will Experience life 'til we've had our fill." I liked this best.....touches the heart rather soft.....  -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"for your gaze seems to explore yet concurrently caress my being." Very nice description of my gaze. ha... James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Very nicely said. 'Ethereal beauty I could drown in Lest I take great care.' Oh, I like that. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
sooooo pretty..... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* you write of such beautiful friendship. I love this poem, sweet and gentle. Thank you so much for sharing. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA~ Thanks. Your heart should be touched softly. jmlee~ Quite a gaze you have there  Marge~ Thank you VERY much. I always appreciate your stopping by my poor attempts at poetry. Sunshine~ Soooooooooooooo nice of you to say so. Startime~ One more *sigh* and I will melt. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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