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Life Giving Storm
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Life Giving Storm |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Life Giving Storm Karen Torbiak 2000 Skies blacken, clouds rolling in, tripping over themselves as they race to reach the shore The cliff raises with tall majesty depicting strength, endurance and steadfastness in its very appearance Barely seen but standing firm, arms reaching, legs spread, face raised into the storm she stands Wild, maddened winds whip the flowing, white robe around her form showing its disapproval at her presence during this display of power Lightning flashes violently from cloud to cloud showing this soul the great passion held by the Gods of this earth Thunder rolls across the boiling heavens ever growing louder in its desire to express anger at her very presence The rains come slashing down on face and limb in furious sheets hoping to drive away this human intruder Still she stands firm as she feels the strength of the storm filling her being, blending herself with the powers of nature With arms raised she shouts her response into the winds of this storm that assaults her senses Over and over her anger is projected to blend with the anger of nature raging all about her As suddenly as the coming of the storm a light of great beauty breaks through the blackness to cover her in its cleansing heat Slowly the clouds depart leaving peace and serenity behind, she smiles with the knowledge that again she stood firm against the storms of her life and is renewed Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow!  I am so LOVING this one.......I love the rain.....makes me so happy.......  -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Powerfully told. This is excellent writing. Enjoyed it much. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Thank you SEA and Poeminister for your kind comments. I love the power and passion of storms. This vision was captivating and had to be written. Love to you both from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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