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She Ran With Wild Horses
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She Ran With Wild Horses |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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She ran with wild horses On the beaches of your heart Reeking havoc with your emotions All the while smiling, looking directly at you Her Auburn hair, raining down her back Flowing in the ocean's breeze She is as majestic as the creatures she runs with Taking your breath and rendering you speechless How free and impossibly beautiful this woman is Who is she? Why is she looking at you as though you hold her heart Within your eyes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You woke up and nuzzled close to me Spoke the words you couldn't in your dream You said, baby, I love you And swore you could smell the ocean within the tangles my hair ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA...this...is mine.... and it stays in my library... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ Wow! Thank you  -SEA |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I love it, I love it!!!I love oceans and I love horses. *giggling with delight* my hair is even auburn. How perfectly wonderful it this poem. It even has my favorite subject, LOVE. Fantastic, thank you so very much for the read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very, very well done, original, great, wonderful. jwesley |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
SEA---I think this is my favorite of yours by far...totally captivating...and the last verse portrays that sleepy comfort of waking perfectly. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You are just totally amazing...beautiful idea beautifuly portrayed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sea....James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well, Sea-gator...ya know what... this is AWESOME poetry!! very cool... very original and creative your muse lit up the sky with this one later-running-wild-gator  jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Startime~ I'm so happy you liked this! Thank you very much  JWesley~ thank you sweetie Serenity~ you make me smile, thank you! Paula~ thank you you are so sweet!James~ been a while....nice to see you thank you Janet~ Yea! Thank you, very nice of you to say Awesome..... -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
SEA.....this is outstanding.....love this beautiful poem......wonderful penned. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ thank you for your kind words -SEA |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This was gorgeous Sea!!! What a beautiful dream you wove into reality...*sigh* so very tender~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BDC~ thank you, I'm so glad you liked this one...........my husband is the best inspiration I could ever hope for. -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, this is beautiful, and I love it, and you KNEW that too, didn't you? Yes this is in my library, wonderful excellant writing. Love it love it love it. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA --i loved the imagery. Beautiful write. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mushy~ thank you sweetie I'm so glad you did PM~ THANKS -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WOW. I go away for a while and I get overwhelmed by you. Tain't fair ;-) Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~ thank you........and where have you been hiding yourself?! Glad to see you again! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea--Wonderful!! I love the atmesphere of this beginning...and then what an interesting ending..great writing! |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Martie~ thank you -SEA |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
What a beautiful and thought-provoking poem this was Sea.....great job! Nathan |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nate~ that is very sweet of you, thank you - SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Most definitely my new favorite of yours and it goes in my library as well. Now promise me that you will submit this one for the new book when it is time and that you also submit it for the main site. This one deserves to be seen by all. Truely lovely my friend, just as you are. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ thank you so much! I don't honestly know how to submit my poems to the main site.....I've wanted to for a long time, just never got about to it Thanks for the kind words -SEA |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful SEA! So picturesque ... what a wonderful theme, and so beautifully portrayed, very much enjoyed! And to submit SEA ... all ya gotta do, is at the top of your poem, beside the profile and edit buttons, is another button of a little yellow folder with a blue arrow across it. If you mouse over it, it will say "click to submit your poem to Passions" ... just click and follow along! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 11-29-2000).] |
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