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My Muse Was On Vacation
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My Muse Was On Vacation |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
My Muse Was On Vacation My muse was on vacation He didn’t tell me that he’d gone I went to write some poetry Couldn’t come up with even one I started thinking, hey! What’s this? This is just ridiculous My hunger to write was always there But my writing was insidious No matter what I thought The words just laughed at me Then I searched and found my muse Living out his fantasy Sitting on a beach Sipping on a glass of wine I asked him why he left And why he left me with no rhyme I got tired is what he said Needed a break from you You’re poems are like a roller coaster What was I suppose to do But don’t you worry yourself my dear I’m ready to come back Your writing is atrocious I have to put you back on track So once again I look to him In rhyme I open part of me The love, the tears and some just fun My thoughts, my words, my poetry |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kat- this is great. imagine that he left and didn't even invite you to come along? how rude!  loved this very much!take care. ~amy~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Absolutely delightful!!!! Of course, there are many that think poetry shouldn't rhyme anymore, but I truly enjoyed the consistent rhythm and rhyme of this piece. I absolutely must post my "I Live on Writer's Block." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kat~ Delightfully done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's forever pesky when the Muse doesn't consider asking us for time off and arranges its own calendar, hey?... Fun! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
Oh that naughty naughty muse Leaving you with no inspiration I will be your muse While the other is on vacation And if perchance you like me More than the other one Then my Kat you can have me And we'll have loads of fun! lol Another lovely one Kat... Dakota |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Amy: Yeah! Come to think of it. That was rude wasn't it? Well I think it's time for a different muse then. Glad you liked it thanks! VAS: I agree! Not all poems need to have a rhyme and to tell you the truth, that's something I'm working on. There's alot that don't rhyme and I love them. By the way, I'm glad you posted your "I Live on Writer's Block" poem. I loved it! Thanks for your reply! Marge: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sunshine: Yes it is! I mean one day I'm writing poems the next, I can't even put a sentence together. LOL Thanks for your reply. Dakota: I've tossed my other muse aside We can take vacation together and I'll let you be my guide As per chance I like you? Well here's a hint I hope that answer's you So can I have you my sweet muse? You can be the light that shines my poetry The one I'll always choose Oops! My muse just read what I wrote and walked out! Dakota! I need help! Now! I ran out of things to say! Why don't you come over and give me some inspiration. LOL Thanks Dakota! That was sweet and I'm glad you enjoyed it! kat |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ha..a cute one kat...loved it..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
yes, kat, i liked the rhythm of this piece..so smooth flow..thanx for this delightful read and for the smile you put on my face |
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