Open Poetry #11 |
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Soft And Tender |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
Soft And Tender ~*Marge Tindal*~ Soft and tender - I surrender to your kisses across my shoulder making me feel so wanted and perhaps just a little bit bolder The easy way - you display your love with affection flowing making it easy to want to be just where this moment is going So eagerly - I agree responding to your kisses warm and tender unto this rapture of delight Soft and tender - I surrender ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, I surrender already! I ain't never gonna be able to compete with poetry this wonderful. Write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Marge.... quote: too true...it's what you do... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Soft and Tender indeed, Marge, warm and gentle too. Words of love. jwesley |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You put into words just how it is. I've been surrendering for over 30 years and it's sooo soft and tender. You have such a way with words. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Yes Marge, this is wonderful! I love how you do what you do! ![]() |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You do have a soft and tender heart...love the poem! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You wear soft and tender so very well my friend...this is so beautiful!! The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was beautiful Marge. I so love reading your Soft and Tender side. |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you sure know how to spoil us with your love poetry.... ![]() this thought just came to me the other day...i have mostly seen love poetry from you...mi think that you must be a real happy-go-lucky gal in real life for most people find it easier to express their dark sides.... excuse my ramblings...LOL |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it a lot!!!!!!!! ![]() |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge~ Your tender poetic heart glows in this one. Beautiful...as always. Deb |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
SIGH....soft and tender suits you so very well |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
soft and tender, just as the person who wrote it, great and wonderful poem Marge... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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LoveBug![]()
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Such a beautiful love poem, Marge! It makes me want to go out and find someone to "surrender" to! (j/k) Seriously, this is a wonderful piece by a wonderful lady. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is one of your excellant, wonderful, poems and I really love it. You do these so well, it's utterly fabulous. Take care Mushy Marsha ![]() Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge, Very lovely and tender. Enjoyed this much... Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ LOL ! You do just fine girly-girl ! Thanks. Karilea~ I sure try. Thanks for noticing, my friend. JWesley~ You are sweet to think so. INot2B~ The surrender is so easy, huh ? Thank you so much for the compliment. SEA~ Thank ya', gal. I appreciate your thoughts. Martie~ You know I'm a softie ! *Hugs* ButterfliesDC~ Thank you. I think it fits me best. KitKat~ I'm glad to share it with you all. Kaile~ LOL @ spoiling you ! I am a happy person and that little love muse just insists on riding in my car and whispering lovey stuff to me ! *I think I'll post a dark one just to prove to you that I've got 'em ! ![]() VanDana~ You and soft and tender go together, my friend. BloomingRose~ Thank you for seeing it, sweet lady. Paula~ Oh, I thank you, hon. Charisma~ Y'all are just too nice ! But I love it ! ![]() LoveBug~ LOL ! Go for it gal ! Thanks. Marsha~ I do appreciate the FAB from you ! PoeMinister~ Thanks so much. *My heartfelt thanks to each of you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Tastfully Tender Tindals... What's for breakfast Marge..? I'm tired of oatmeal, got any rice crispies or frosted flakes..? love always, bubba |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge!! Denise |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- 'unto this rapture of delight Soft and tender - I surrender' lovely, as usual, my friend... ![]() love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This poem is written the same as the title Marge...Soft and Tender....very sensuous and provocative work...exciting read!!! ethome |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ How's about a Western Omlette ??? Yum ! But, hey ... Rice Krispies are my favorite ! I like to eat breakfast BEFORE I go to bed - keeps ya' from having to putz-round in the kitchen in the morning ! Except for that COFFEE ! ![]() Denise~ Thanks, my friend. ![]() Vicky~ You sure know how to pick a favorite verse. Mine too ! ![]() ETHome~ I appreciate your reply. Thanks, sweet poet. ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A soft and tender flow of words...James |
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