Open Poetry #11 |
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Shadow of a Doubt |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Shadow of a doubt The kind that leaves you breathless Searching for the truth Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
so simply lovely!!!! Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
A Senryu that rings so true. Funny how a one little thing can leave us digging and search for answers, and the truth. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very true! I couldn't have written it better ...I love the way you think..... so keep it up my dear honest poet...ethome |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Paula, Have no doubt and you will feel much stronger within. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Amazing how such few words can gather so many tears and emotions...hugs to you Paula...may the shadows be chased away but glorious sunshine~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I know this feeling Paula...amazing, how you painted confusion with such simple and direct lines! Love it. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
A Whispers Caress...thank you Irie...the truth is worth digging for...thank you ethome...glad you like the way I think sweet poet man...thanks Daniel...there are times you doubt no matter how hard you try not to Holly...thanks for the hugs sweet butterfly Serenity...thanks |
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