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Goodnight Haiku |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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eyelids close in sleep soft sighs raise from within deep dreams come on the wind soft sigh brings on dreams visions of you can be seen on eyelids serene deep breath lifts sweet sigh too soon the night shall pass by sun will rise again< !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thank you for the glimpse of a sun that shines even when she sleeps  |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
I love haiku, though am not very good at it. This is truly lovely. wonderful writing. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sunshine, Breathless piece. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sun rises again moon says good morning my friend we smile with delight ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
greet Sunshine anon she rises to zenith now and remains aloft warming us each day giving slowly to the night promising return greet Sunshine anon taking away lonely night promising new life Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
you ALL make Haiku too much fun...it might even become an obsession if SOME of you keep inspiring me... and Whisper? try it...you'll like it...{~,^} Thank you all very much... and Interloper? welcome home! 'Deer...they're called...street lamps...LOL... Dan, Sven...thank you both... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
sun rises too soon I long to walk with the moon for a while longer Well done, Sunshine.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
moon light come to me Lone Wolf walks along with thee keening song of love and so you shall, LW...thank you Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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