Open Poetry #11 |
Ocean Haiku 03 |
Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
After the storm, one gull, one piece of driftwood floating together. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sounds so calming. Elizabeth |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Hmm I am not sure I was thinking of it as calming, being the aftermath of a storm but thanks for reading Elizabeth, I appreciate your responding |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
yes, i sort of caught my breath when i read the words "one gull".... |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
I appreciate your reading and responding to all my poems Kaile, thanks a bunch! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I felt a calmness too, sorry, but the calm after a storm at the ocean is unbeatable..... -SEA |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Bravo!!I love the vision of this. I found it so very soothing. Thank you so vey much. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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