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Lost In Your Memory
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Lost In Your Memory |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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Surrounded by feelings I can't escape Lost in your memory tonight This isn't where I want to be Yet I have no control; I cannot fight You're here with me, I swear it's real All the love I feel for you I am unable to conceal You see through my soul You've always had the ability To create this want in me With one look from you ~ it happens, automatically I have no barriers No way to disguise Even in dreams I can tell you no lies So painful to see your handsome face The ache of missing you, the sound of your voice I'm lost in your memory tonight I simply have no choice ~SEA~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, this is utterly divine, this really is one of your absolute best. It took my breath away. Wonderful excellant write from you. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ I like it when you wade in the memories. Nice one, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You see through my soul You've always had the ability To create this want in me With one look from you ~ it happens, automatically ===================== no sense in even trying to fight it Sea-gator... its like swiming against the tide... beautiful,emotional,expressive, poem girlie.. and you already know...how well I relate jm There are moments ... when I Love you beyond the limits of my human heart ... ...you will always be mine. Collin Raye |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I have no barriers No way to disguise Even in dreams I can tell you no lies" Beautiful SEA ... ahhhh, to be lost in those memories, wonderful and sentimental, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ You are too kind, thank you  Marge~ thank you, I like it when you do too! Janet~ I know you know this too well, thank you so much Kit~Very lost.....thank you -SEA |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- 'So painful to see your handsome face The ache of missing you, the sound of your voice I'm lost in your memory tonight I simply have no choice' boy...isn't it the truth though... i felt this one all the way through, my friend...those memories can be tough, but there's no sense in fighting them...they always win... hugs to you, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vicky~ yep, they always win......no matter what you do.... thank you -SEA |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Oh how absolutely beautifully sad. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"This isn't where I want to be yet I have no control I cannot fight"... Thank you sweetie for sharing such beauty in words once again... Coco |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA--You have a way with writing your feelings--a beautiful way. Nicely written. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
AWC~ Thank you Coco~ thank you so much PM~ I'm happy you liked this -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love this one Sea......you expressed your feelings so well...... ((warm huge hug)) Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Memories can be beautifully painful. This was done with great emotion and heart. Thank you so much for the read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ thank you so much Startime~ Painful and definately beautiful all at once, yes. Thank you -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...wonder how much time is spent in memories...hopefully your memories will be happy one's...James |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
ah yes, those memories painfull and sweet, they're always there! well done! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James and Eagle One~ thanks guys -SEA |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"I'm lost in your memory tonight" Ah, SEA, my friend, we love, and we long, and we always remember... your feelings here are an open book...wonderfully written. jwesley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, I'm going to give this to those OSCAR's tomorrow, but please don't expect a reply soon because they are a real shower. (You can tell I love them can't you!) Take care Mushy It is a wonderful poem love, and they will love it, they just won't rush to tell me about it.  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I think there are times when we just NEED the thrust of a memory thorn...makes us appreciate what we do have in our hands and hearts right now....love you sweetie Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, SEA! Denise |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JWesley~ I'm afraid you are right, I am very much an open book when it comes to my feelings...... thank you Mushy~ tell the OSCAR's to take their time, I don't like to rush men..... Paula~ yes, and there are times when we just can't stop the memories from coming, no matter how much we'd rather not face those feelings again...... thank you sweetie Denise~ it's wonderful to have you stop by and read, thank you -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The ache of the memory comes...and then the tender comfort of knowing they are only a dream away...and then waking up alone...the double edged sword...Excellent weave of heart and soul...I know many will realate to your words of weave Sea~ < !signature--> The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 11-28-2000).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I have no barriers No way to disguise Even in dreams I can tell you no lies ======================= Your words have no disguise either. wonderful! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BDC~ thank you, I'm very lucky, I don't have to wake up alone, my husband is always there.....but even his love can't stop some memories Vandana~ thank you Interloper~ thanks, glad you're back -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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