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Love's Hope
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Love's Hope |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Love’s Hope Karen Torbiak 2000 She descends from clouds so fine carried by the Winds Of Time Her flowing robe of turquoise bright flows round her body made so light Her hair flows long of darkest night blowing where it will as is right Her eyes twinkle is seen from afar reflecting passions of the stars Her name and title given by one divine Love’s Hope she’s call through all time Sent in search of men of earth whose loss of love takes sense of worth Love’s poems she sends into their hearts bringing hope of love for a better start She makes their bodies yearn and feel to find someone whose love they’ll seal She fills them with great compassion that they may show loves burning passion She heals them with the Winds Of Time that on love’s hope they prepare to dine When you wonder if loves true just ask your heart what it would do So men of earth who have endured such pain obey Love’s Hope that you may love again Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"So men of earth who have endured such pain obey Love’s Hope that you may love again" Excellent rhyme and flow, and a great message in this poem. Nicely written. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karen with this write you have truly earned the title Startime. It was heavenly. Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Poeminister Thank you so much. This is the second of Love's Angels. I am glad you enjoyed her.  Kethry Thank you so much for your wonderful compliment. It means a lot coming from someone with your talent. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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