Open Poetry #11 |
Kit weaves |
Sunshine
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She is a kindred spirit she flies and deep within her soul she cries so may I reach across the barrier of land may I reach across gently take your hand come walk with me talk with me lift my spirits as you do so easily for I've come to treasure every whim of you and smile of you and in memory I glide with you in dreams that make up we come stand with me in this dream of light here on the porch of ever-right and sit in this rocker alongside of me and sip a glass of sun-made tea and I shall sit here at your feet and you may braid words as you comb my hair for when you're done then I will share the same with you as we do back and forth and forth again this small bit of passion our words we come to share it is all I ever seek I'm so glad you're here. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karilea, This is beautiful in ways I can't even begin to describe. Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I agree wholeheartedly with your sentiments Sunshine.....this is a wonderful expression of the hand of friendship.....Karilea you're a great girl! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Who could ask for a friendship better expressed than this....and between two such incredibly special people. Can I be a friend, too. My hair is very easy to braid.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, that is one of your better best, oh kid this is sooooooooo great. A wonder to behold, and I love this I really and truly do. Absolutely excellant, you missus are a fantastic poet, as too is Kit. Together you are two of my dearest soul friends. Take care MM (I'm working, but I'm taking a break) Don't you dare say when do I ever do anything else, Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Now I know that it's going to be a good day!! Ladies, thank you so much. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Kethry, thank you...Kit has always been a special person...I thank you for your kind response... ethome, I so like it when a man of renown agrees with me... Balladeer in braids...THIS would be interesting... Marsha...Kit is the poet....I am the official poet wannabe.... Sven...all days are good days...it is what we do with them that makes them special...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I honestly don't know what I'd do without you guys. Karilea, this is so incredibly touching, and so beautiful. Thank you so very, very much. One minute I'm sad, and the next, I'm smiling so hard my cheeks hurt. This is such a beautiful portrayal of kindred spirits, and you've touched my very soul. This is truly beautiful, and something I shall treasure Karilea. You really are "Sunshine" in the sweetest and most honest sense. Thank you! Best wishes and much appreciation (and please do come join us Michael ... I'd love to see you in braids! ) /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Kit, how can we not applaud you when it is you who is so special? Thanks for peeking in...[knew your name would grab you!]< !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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