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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Somewhere, Tonight... We left our barriers, To be worn, By the wind of communication. Somehow, We found some honesty, In the middle, Of a chaotic state affairs, Whirling around in our hearts. I'll look forward to next time, And working on the foundation. Tell me.. When can you come, To read my mind again? My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It's totally amazing how that connection is made and one can actually feel it...real good writing!!...........ethome |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Temptress, I can thoroughly relate to this one. Excellent. Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
It's pretty amazing isn't it? There are times where the moon is just so And you find that when it's all said and done It's the words that matter and you find that you really can speak and not hide Behind that wall And that you can build a new wall . . .With a window. . . Great poem Temptress. . .  -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Oh, I like this one...like a candle in the soul. Robert Joseph |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Filled with such truth and light, my friend. This is such a beautiful thing when it happens between two people.*sigh* wonderful. Thank you so much for the read Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Temptress~ Yes ... you are in touch ! Lovely write, dear lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ethome: Yes, it is an amazing thing. Thanks for enjoying this! Kethry: I'm glad you can relate, because it is a wonderful thing to relate to. Thanks for reading! Sven: Yes. It is was an honor to come from behind one of my walls for a time. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Robert: Thank you for the beautiful compliment. Startime: You are most welcome, and thank you for taking the time to enjoy it. Marge: Thank you. I'm trying..one touch at a time.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Temptress- i really love this one!! this 'connection' is a very special thing indeed. hugs, -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-26-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It seems there's a lot of mind-reading around here... Nicely done, Jenn..  |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Excellent writing, Temptress! I know exactly how this is! Absolutely love this one!! sp  'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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