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Twilight's Arrival
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Twilight's Arrival |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
"Twilight's Arrival" As copper light upon her dances gifting gold to autumn hair And music, still as breath, begins to swathe about her, fragile there Approaching, lashes silken shadows skin the hue of moonlight's mask Fragrant flood of season's scent intoxicates the fullest flask And though she is of in-between her moments, soft but fleeting few In secret vow a promise kept tomorrow she returns to you Rainydays |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
With a promise of her return in the morrow, how could it not be the product of a smile for him. Lovely write from you once again and so nice to be treated to one of you beautiful verses today. Especially loved the setting in the night as night time tends to lend some very special moments of reflection for me. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this was very beautifull. Twilight leading to the velvety softness of night. Oh yes, I totally enjoyed this poem. Thank you so much for sharing Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
O, this is beautiful! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Mark, Startime, Sunshine, thank you for reading and taking time to tell me you enjoyed.  Rainydays |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and we will welcome her again. . . wonderful Rainy. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Copper, brown and white in shadows, Watching, glance and come tomorrow, I will be here watching, I will wait your coming, Be the bright and pass my window. Gloom |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Just gorgeous...I love the way you personified twilight. Elizabeth |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
it took me so long to read this yuh but i love it i do! very nice yuh twilight is a great thing to be enchanted on |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rainydays, this... Approaching, lashes silken shadows skin the hue of moonlight's mask Fragrant flood of season's scent intoxicates the fullest flask ...is magic Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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