Open Poetry #11 |
Missing My SONshine |
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
For my second born Jordan, I love you..... You are my ray of sunshine you make every day so bright even though you and your brother always seem to fight you make everything worhtwhile just with your sweet smile you make my heart skip a beat when you light up for your fav treat you make all the people freeze when you say thank you and please always charming and oh so sweet you knock the girls off their feet i miss the cuddles and "snug as a bug" even miss your candy stuck on the rug i miss you forever calling out my name pulling me aside, just to play a game i know i didn't always do what you'd liked but i know you won't forget that mountain we hiked and if i could fly to where you are now i'd make up for all that lost time somehow because you are my baby youngest of two and i would shed tears if i knew you were blue and someday i hope to explain why i didn't board that plane mommy still loves you she knows daddy does too that's why she trusts him to take care of you and when the time comes that i can have you here i'll show you how much i always cared so for now my sweet SONshine keep smiling for me we'll be together soon just wait and see..... I love you and miss you very much Jordan, and now the whole world knows how much.....stay sweet for me love always, Mom :@) Julie :) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Jordan woulda been so sad if his poem wasn't as great as Justin's but you did them both justice. very nice |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of the time when my wife left me and took my three sons with her and I would hear a young boy calling out to his dad at the supermarket or the store and I would think it was one of my sons calling me...I know this is a hard time for you...take care of yourself and visit with your children as soon as possible...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oft times the hardest decisions are the ones in God's hands...be well, take care, God bless you all... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Double hugs going your way! Deb |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
JulieAnn, i only wish i knew the right words to comfort you.... take care |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
They grow up very fast..my son has children of his own now..seems like yesterday he was a baby..wishing you and your sons well.. ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-29-2000).] |
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soozieque_28 Junior Member
since 2000-11-28
Posts 28Tennessee |
I love this poem, and Inow how it feels to miss your son...only m son was killled in a wreck when he was three...yesterday would have been his 5th birthday. I wish you the best and hope you see your children soon. Take care. Peggy |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
read with tears in my eyes.....I can understand the pain in your heart. wish you strength ((warm huge hugs)) Charisma |
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