Open Poetry #11 |
Last But Not Least....Well, Maybe Least |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I'm not sure, and I don't know, To be poetic is to bare one's soul. Go ahead and give it a try, Tell a tale, maybe lie. Go ahead and step in this stuff, One or two times, should be enough Give it a kick and a few "ha ha's" It may be the cure for the holiday blahs? |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
OK Toe I'll give it a go But before I start I want you to know I've had a few and caught a little glow Lets cheer up this place from the holiday blahs A poem, a rhyme or just some Ha! Ha's! Not because were crazy just because So Passion Poets change what was Now that I've replied Toe won't be least Because of this reply I've just released Come on friends make this a blast If you don't I'm gonna be last |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Geesch! I knew all this garbage I posted tonight was real garbage, but I thought at least someone would tell me how bad of garbage it is?...... [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Thanks Insect [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Toe, It's too cryptic to laugh at and too sad to sigh at. Don't know the meaning but I like the rhyme. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Toe, my friend... Have you been kickin' garbage around again?.. Don't be stubbing your big ole Toe on anything dangerous out there... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hope the doldrums don't stay long, Toe...hope they're easy come, faster go... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've given us so many laughs... and cured a lot of blahs, whatever the season. *S* But your serious poems pack a powerful wallop. *S* You're right... Some poems are simply fingertips conveying a thought or playing rhyme time or seeing where a phrase will go... but for me, that's fairly rare. Most of mine introduce the person behind the pen... albeit in bits and pieces. *S* And I think that's the case for most of us... a bit of soul peeks through whether we gave it permission to do so or not. *S* I like this, sweets!! |
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