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One Hour of Her Day
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One Hour of Her Day |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One Hour of Her Day Isn't it something how a woman will jump out of the shower and have you thinking soon enough she'll be ready to go and next thing you know it's been at least an hour. She's drying her hair and putting on lipstick stuff, while applying her eyeliner and powdery puff, combing her hair and brushing a plenty, til finally she's sliding into her silky smooth panties. But don't even think that she's finished yet cause the nails are freshly painted and still quite wet. She'll finish off with a cute little skirt and a sequined satin blouse enough to make any man flirt. And suddenly she's ready taking only one hour and I'm thinking she looks so damn good perhaps I used the wrong shower. Now I don't know about all that powdery puff fluff but I do know some women look into their mirror to see beauty thru their eyes and they think that the makeup is where the beauty lies. If they don't spend one hour making themselves up with all that makeup stuff they don't think they'll appear glamorous enough. Speaking from the experience of women I admire made up or not they still light my fire. And outer beauty is not the only beauty I see a womans inner beauty can be very glamorous to me. Jameslee@November17,2000 |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Had to smile guiltily through this one!  But I LOVED the ending. A wonderful poem to read in the morning. Thank you for sharing it.To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ You are such a sweet man.......You make my heart flutter! I So enjoyed this poem.  Hugs and a smooch to you! -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James, this is a wonderful poem, and it's true, it's all true. You are such a wonderful romantic, and I love this poem. Wonderful work really wonderful. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
James, you have captured us...for a moment...and I shall treasure this glimpse of your inner knowledge, knowing that at least one man appreciates, whether made up or not... God you're good... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes..sounds like me..although the older i get haa..i dont care if i go out without make up...i never use to be like that.. i wouldnt even go to the mailbox without makeup..how a woman changes as she gets older..pssst...you better delete *dam* before nan sees it with her eraser...haa right nan? she has that cute little evil eye..haa....  ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-17-2000).] |
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Words_of_Glitter Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 90USA |
Wow, this poem was cute and silly, yet very heartwarming and true and profoundly stated. I loved reading it...it had a nice rhyme flow, yet you didn't try to obviously rhyme every line. Nice one. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
How lovely to be able to see this clearly!!! You are one in a million Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"And outer beauty is not the only beauty I see a womans inner beauty can be very glamorous to me. James, hopefully there is a lady in your life you can give this one to. She'll love it, it's wonderful. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
All men do say, this James but call us crazy but there's something about that powder puff, that sends our beauty blazing, I guess it gives us that special edge, even though when all is said, it's just a ritual that we do, I do kind of like the eye liner though, o.k like it all, but it's very nice when a man says You don't need it. Very good poem James us women love to hear that! Hey I BLUSH without the blush! hehe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
sorry hon, but I must disappoint you, because its always me that have to wait for my hubbie and sons.......I don't wear make-up, and never fan my hair either. My sons can stay for hours in the bathroom....who said that women need their time...*lol* But I enjoyed your poem very much.....great write. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You sweet man...how any woman can resist you I just dont know...hugs and kisses friend |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you all for sharing her hour of the day...I wasn't complaining...just fascinated how women can transform themselves...it's like having too different women for the price of one...James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You are a wonderful human being James. It is a person who is confident with themself that can see beyond the mirror. What is on the inside is most definitely what counts. Cute poem though!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Ok, it's time to let you in on a secret. That hour she spends getting ready is just her giving you time to seduce her. Maybe next time you will understand why she is taking so long. In case your wondering, yes you could of done it all and still she would of been ready in that same hour. The only difference is when you walk out the door both of you would have that smile of satisfaction. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Marina and inot for the nice comments. Marina I wait for the beauty to shine from the inside...you see the outer beauty right away but something is not right until in inner beauty is revealed.. inot yes I know we are enjoying each others company and seducing each other...James |
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