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Heart of Crystal
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Heart of Crystal |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Heart of Crystal such is it as she has transparency, most brilliant form likened to diamonds’ norm with exception, see the simplest rejection of heart break, so forlorn as in her inner chi shines this shimmer of light sigh there is not a crystal ball that holds the inner truths so well something once seen, heard like a bell something of life she would tell could she break past the crystal wall could you but hear the call as in her inner chi shines this shimmer of light sigh were you to study crystallography or even her given autography and dispel any and all mystery would you therein find serenity or just her lovesome memory in her heart of crystal beauty as in her inner chi shines this shimmer of light sigh and grown from pure crystallite her charms for you would crystallize a vision of beauty before your eyes and you would wear her light and catch the rainbow of her bright and then you would hear her sigh but in her inner chi shines this shimmer of light sigh Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is truly beautiful, beautiful in every sense of the word!!!!!!!! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your muse is all aglow again my dear... this is so cool.. so crytic and mystic and full of illusion and vision ... very well written and presented Sun. beautiful indeed. jm |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, applause, kudos, and loud cheers. Whenever I think you must have produced your very best, you present another that is better and so on and so on. Love this one I really do. It is a reflection of your souls beauty, and it truly is. Take care MM  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
AH, crystal....so beautiful, so delicate, so shining...with so many facets. Dear sunshine, let me make it clear If you would be my chandelier My eyes would sparkle 'neath your brilliant glow My darkness will forever fade Due to the difference you have made So thank you...I just wanted you to know |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You have ligtened my days And have changed my ways. You are a facetted gem On a roses stem. *L* Sy |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kathleen, warm praise indeed, thank you... Janet Marie, I borrowed her from you for a light time, thank you for lending... Marsha, you spoil me so...truly...thank you... 'Deer...Sybil had facets too...perhaps we should be wary...{~,^}...but thank you, Sir!... Sy, I will always like you just as you are...but if I have lightened anything, I hope it has been your spirit...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
these words not crystal, but diamond surely pure diamonds. . .  --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, < !signature-->for you a marquise cut line and a thank you Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-24-2000).] |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Blooming Roses Grasp The Trestle A Place Firm To Hold Held So Close The Flowers Grow Beyond Expectations To Pure Showering Radiance Upheld By UniquePermanence |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
DreamSeeker...this is amazing... wow...I am overwhelmed, thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your pen has once again dipped into my heart and found the tears that don't often fall as of late...this is beautifully done and the format calls out for it to be read slowly and absorbed...so very delicate and beautiful and yet so sad and fragile...excellent weaving~ [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is an amazing piece. I love the format and the flow of your beautiful words. You are an extremely talented poet, and we are lucky to have you in our mist! Thanks for posting."Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Delicate as crystal and strong as tempered glass is the very heart of this poem. Beautiful and a fantastic read. Thank you so much for sharing. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
You have a heart of crystal, so we've all been told, Better than the cardiac organ Of one like mine so cold, Broken, split and cold as ice, Regret has torn it loose, I have but one small beat left, Enough to play the blues. Your poem is done with eloquence, Your thoughts are true to heart, I wish I could relate this way, I'm just not quite this smart. My heart has little feelings left, My mind's one great big blur I wish my heart would beat it's last, and this was my last word. [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
SunShine... This is a true gem!  I read this over and over....and enjoyed every word. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Butterflies, you are right, to be read slowly, so that all women would for a moment see themselves... Lovebug, we've all been quite fortunate to find many wonderful words in this vast gallery of poets...thank you... Startime, thank YOU for joining Passions! A warm welcome, and I hope you enjoy many delightful days and nights as you come to read and write... Toe, we love your funny bone...there is no one else like you...but I'm sorry that you're going...through these terrible holiday blues...come and join these your friends, come and be of good cheer...yes these words come easy enough, and they should last throughout the year... Hugs to you, my friend...thank you for reading... Irie, thank you for adding this sparkle... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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