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Fate's Kiss....and Destiny
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Fate's Kiss....and Destiny |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Call forth my heart, draw me near Whisper softly in my ear Tell me of the love you hold In your core the purest gold ~*~ Draw my hand to graze your lips Within my soul your touch slips Take my face into your hands Piercing glow from your gaze brands ~*~ Weave the words of promised lace Drape me in your loving grace Don’t let me go when death calls Stay until that last star falls ~*~ To live one day void of you My heart would be torn in two I’m not meant to live alone My life’s purpose is now known ~*~ Eternity is not long For us to sing this rare song A life of two lived as one Through heaven’s gate we've been spun ~*~ As we find the promised path Laying here in luna’s bath At long last our dreams come true Here within me...there breathes you ~*~ I dedicate this soft weave To those of you that believe Of fate’s kiss and destiny That some things are meant to be |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Weave the words of promised lace Drape me in your loving grace Don’t let me go when death calls Stay until that last star falls" What a precious weave. Nicely written. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
oh my... a great big ***sigh*** this was a lovely lovely read!!! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
---Here within me...there breathes you really beyootiful write BDC |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! this is just so beautiful!! Once again my friend you leave me speechless!< !signature--> "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 11-24-2000).] |
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Weave_Watcher Junior Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 21 |
Wonderful weave from your heart and yes i believe in fate and destiny. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
As we find the promised path Laying here in luna’s bath At long last our dreams come true Here within me...there breathes you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ `Beautiful.....truly loved this wonderful piece....more than excellent. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Eternity is not long For us to sing this rare song A life of two lived as one Through heaven’s gate we've been spun ~*~ As we find the promised path Laying here in luna’s bath At long last our dreams come true Here within me...there breathes you ~*~ I dedicate this soft weave To those of you that believe Of fate’s kiss and destiny That some things are meant to be ================ I know the sweetness of fates kiss I believe for I've tasted its bliss I believe in destiny and in the gifts of poetry. I believe in meant to be ... for I have seen butterflies flying free. ********* YES ... YES ... YES ... oh girlie..ya got me with that last verse and ya know it ... (and ya know its gonna get me and Eagle started on that debate again)   LOLWhat a beautiful weave me SS .. so soft and gentle ... written like a whispered promise. Your pen was dipped in moonbeams and stardust for this one ... absolutely beautiful my SS, my butterfly collection gets more glorius with every post  love ya beautiful butterfly me There are moments ... when I Love you beyond the limits of my human heart ... ...you will always be mine. Collin Raye |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"Through heaven's gate we've been spun" I think the whole poem's spun out of heaven, and it's a beautiful write!!! ethome |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Little one, I truly believe that with this piece, you've graced your crown in gold with a single, perfect diamond, which only adds to gild the perfection penned in this most charming, beautifully weave of heart's desire... It will remain therefore, a crown jewel in my library... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Poeminister* I sincerely thank you for your kind reply~ Snow* Thank you so very much~ W.O.W.* Awwwe you'll make me blush! Thank you~ Eagle* To leave you speechless my friend is an honor...thank you from the depths of my heart~ WW* Thank you sweetheart...yes I know you believe and I believe because of you~ Charisma* You are always far to kind to me...thank you so much~ Jan* Always you see so much more in me and my writing than anyone ever could...quiet glorious comfort my dear sister...Thank you for allowing me to share the gift of the butterfly. Love you my sweet SS~ Ethome* Thank you my friend..your kindness fills me with sunshine today~ Karilea* Your reply touched my heart...thank you so much for the kindness and sincerity that you graced me with today. I truly appreciate it~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
BDC, Wonderful writing, truly beautiful. I really love this one, it has such a lovely feel. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Draw my hand to graze your lips Within my soul your touch slips Take my face into your hands Piercing glow from your gaze brands' Some great lines, butterflies! So beautiful and romantic! Love it!! sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Holly- This is breathtakingly beautiful! So full of love and fate. I believe in things meaning to be also. You weaved my heart and soul with this one...and as always you bring a smile to me. You are such a lovely addition to our family and I am so glad you share your gift with all of us!! take care. love ya, ~amy~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marsha* I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment...thank you very much~ Snowpants* Thank you...it means so much to see you here~ Amy-girl* Just like sunshine you are sweets! Thank you so much for always shining so brightly~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I love the words... a life of two, lived as one through heavens gate we've been spun Exquisite writing! Deb  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Absolutely breathtaking Holly! One of your best for sure. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Oh my....this is sooo incredibly beautiful and touching. Wondrous work, Butterflies. *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Butterflies...you wave your wings above a feeling and words fall like star dust on the page...this is truely beautitul! |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This LoveBug LOVES this love poem! (too many "loves", huh?) Anyway, two thumbs up! I love how this one flows, and I'm glad that you have someone that makes you feel this way. Keep up the great work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Devotion, softly rendered. Well done. --Linda Remember: maintaining a positive attitude may not solve all your problems, but it will certainly annoy enough people to make it worth the effort. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Deb* Heartfelt thanks to you~ Maina* Always a joy when you stop to read...thank you so much~ Krista* Thank you so very much~ Martie* I appreciate your comments so much...thank you my friend~ Lovebug* Never to many "loves"...lol Thank you very much! Linda* It's an honor to see you here...thank you very much~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhh ... 'twas music to my soul Butterflies ... so softly flowing, with such tender and precious sentiments, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Awe my sweet friend. You know that I truely believe in fate and destiny and the words you shared with us in this one are filled with that angelic heart of yours that forever shines in all you touch. Wow...I just really can't come up with the words to tell you just how much I loved this one my friend, but you do know just how much it radiates in me don't you? Well, of course you do. Beautiful piece, now don't go a writin one that will replace my all time favorite of yours, not that you haven't come mighty close to that already lately in quite a few of your most recent posts. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
beautifully penned... wonderful poetry. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Good time to add to my library as I seem to have been overwhelmed the first time around. Just as beautiful a read now as it was then my friend. Even more so and most definitely my favorite of yours now. But the old favorite still holds hands with this one refusing to let go. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
splendid...indeed... Greeneyes *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Oh, this is breathtakingly beautiful! This piece just carried me away with it. Lovely writing! Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
BDC.."Ditto" to what everyone else has said... This is amazingly beautiful, I so enjoy reading your work..Glad this one got back out, I would not have wanted to miss the wonderful , warm feelings I got when I read this... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Don't mind me , just getting this one for the shelf... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mark* Thank you for your first comment and for bringing this back up for a second...it means so much to me and it looks like I've neglected my thank you's on this one...Shame on me!! Kit* thank you so much...your comments are always cherished~ Mike* It's an honor coming from you~ Greeneyes* Many thanks to you for your kindness~ Tara* Heartfelt thanks to you~ LL* You are much to kind...I thank you from the bottom of my heart and it is an honor to be placed in your library...truly it is~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I wish I could do it like this........wow, so beautiful, your talent shines -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Stop the world ! I want to get on ! This one surely slipped by me over the Thanksgiving holiday weekend. I'm soooooooo glad to get a chance to catch up with it. LOVE IT ! Very delicately done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
My Butterfly, You can make an old lady cry with these beautiful words. I'd like to say we were your example, but NO WAY. Keep up the wonderful words. Love and Hugs, ME |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sea* I'm humbled by your words Sea...you are truly one of the finest...thank you~ Marge* Thank you so very very much...you know your comments mean ALOT to me~ Mom* Well touche` because you made me cry with your reply...and you KNOW you are my example and my inspiration...Love you so much...thank you~ |
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