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Something About This Time Of Year
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Something About This Time Of Year |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
Something about this time of year Things become a little less clear The wind in the trees whispers of chances missed and roads not taken Friendships lost you once held dear Leaves float down like lonely memories One by one I remember all the things left only half done Like love once missed because of fear And how I regret not opening that door The sun is bright but not warm like a friendship that should be something more Or distant love that has no form The sky is clear but not my mind My heart’s courage hard to find Questions left unanswered… unasked Fall fills my mind of things past Now turning older but still no wiser No courage to demand No faith to ask Another chance slowly drifts into recent past And still the door is shut fast. [This message has been edited by raleighbttrfly (edited 11-23-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Hi! Let me be the first to say Welcome to Passions This is a great first post. Looking forward to reading more. [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 11-23-2000).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
It is not too late. You can open that door here and make new friends. Enjoyed reading, glad you came to visit on this Thanksgiving holiday. Now that you have opened the door it will stay open to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Raleighbttrfly! Very well expressed! Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Raleigh, here is to the encouragement of many warm, enduring relationships to come...and the friendships you will find here in Passions... Welcome...  Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
bttrfly, welcome to passions, I hope you'll feel at home and stay a while.  Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions, with this beautiful entrance... will look out for more Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions and let me say this is a very delightful way to start ...well done!! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Welcome! Wow, this is a really beautiful poem! I hope to read more  Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a belated welcome to passions  again, i like the direct way you put things across... the sky is clear but not my mind Another chance slowly drifts into recent past and still the door is shut fast simply written but deeply felt |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
well I think you're making a splendid entry into the passions world raleigh.... this is good and as you read and write more you'll get much better .... and yep -- this is the time of year for reflecting -- sigh... |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
Thanks you guys for the time you took to read this pome. This one was writen about a friend of mine Allen, and are relationship. It was written about 4mths ago or so. If you want to read the follow up chek out my post in the Pub forum. Agine thanks. : : |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
smiling at this one so glad i got to see the first post o yuh |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
this is really beautiful, welcome to passions Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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