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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Moments Of Cherished Remember ~*Marge Tindal*~ When forever spins around and drops your pages face up in the lap of my remembering I will gaze upon your ink and count the pleasures of all you've given of yourself to etch a memory deep within my chest of treasured words As I close the book I will leave a rose pressed between your pages so that I may find my way back to you I will remember you are poetry ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hi ya Margie, yanno, my wife used to say this, (of course, her cherished memories were of my out of town trips), but still....she used to say things like; "How can I say I miss ya when I can't get ya ta leave, how can I feel loneliness when I aint got room to breathe.... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sigh ... this is so absolutely beautiful Marge. I just loved the flow in this. Wonderful sentiments, and so visual. I could almost hear the book closing softly, and smell the rose marker. Just lovely!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, welcome back lovely lady. *soft sighs* for the poem. Write on  Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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krysalis Junior Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 22 |
This is absolutely beautiful! A very heart touching piece. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Poetry is spelled Magnificent of heart Artful of weave Romantic of nature Generous of spirit Effervescent flight Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
As I close the book I will leave a rose pressed between your pages so that I may find my way back to you I will remember you are poetry ============================== as are you my dear poet....as are you.. and hey..ITS ABOUT TIME!!!!!!  JEEEEEZE ...we were thinking we were gonna have to beg... but trust me when I tell ya... twas worth the wait ... wonderful enchanting poetry Margie-gator simply lovely ... now...dont keep us waiting so long next time... or I will use my special cowboy connection to roust you out of hiding  hehelater-playing-hard-to-get-muse-gator luv ya me There are moments ... when I Love you beyond the limits of my human heart ... ...you will always be mine. Collin Raye |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I loved this.......felt like memories of my own slipped out and swirled around my heart for a bit..... -SEA |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"When forever spins around and drops your pages face up in the lap of my remembering" Oh my Marge--such beautiful words and lovely thoughts from you...you are such a treasure! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Great opening line marge, grabbed me by the heart and didnt let go till the last line. Welcome back! Regards, Olias |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This one wrapped itself around my heart from the first phrase... it's a beauty! *S* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And this cowboy will forever cherish yours and continue to read and write with you and for you my sweet friend. Love ya bunches ya know.  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- simply beautiful, my friend.. 'As I close the book I will leave a rose pressed between your pages' i love your sentimental muse.. somewhere an angel is sighing.. so good to see you gracing this page of the book again, my friend...i knew you couldn't stay away too long. love and hugs, -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-22-2000).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Very touching and beautiful sentiments, such a flower from the heart. Love this much. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful and precise writing Marge...I truly enjoyed this especially when someone is expressing their love for poetry. Take care! Nathan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge, this is a lovely poem and I wish to hand you a blooming yellow rose (which I've been told means gladness, joy, friendship and you're in my thoughts always) Hugs2U  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all for your kindness and your friendship. Happy Thanksgiving ! Love you~ *Heart-Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful! This place, and the many wonderful poets in it, are filling a large book for me, of very cherished memories. Lots of roses to everyone here. Happy Thanksgiving. Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lovely! Marge, Happy Thanksgiving and when are we going to see your beautiful face? "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Beautiful writing here my friend. Happy Thanksgiving!!!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, Sweet and warm words of wisdom, from a very fine poet, "The Best" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is so beautiful, so touching, and just so cool!!! I loved this! Thanks so much! Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Marge...you always have a way with words. Simply beautiful...... ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful Marge....great words of gratitude and affection like only you can write!! ethome |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! I love it! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My friends~ Thank you all so much for the kind remarks. Please know that I appreciate them all. I am enjoying the holidays with family and sharing much of your lovely poetry with them. I thank each of you for your gifts. *Heart-Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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