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Where Will You Be?
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Where Will You Be? |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
It would be interesting To see what would happen If I turned off the wipers For a while, Let the rain accumulate On the windshield. Would it all stay the same? See, I need fire In this rain! I need passion In this silence! Baby, I always thought You were beautiful, But you chose To turn the other way, Spurning my admiration. Well, now I'm curious to see How you would react To my indifference. Oh, how will things be When I look away? How are you going To get along When I no longer compensate? Everything I had Was obtained exclusively for you. I can't help but wonder: Where will you be When you are inundated? I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SP~ I can totally relate to how this feels....excellent writing.  -SEA |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Thanks, SEA! Glad you liked it! I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
ouch! well said! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
ouch! well said! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's a real comeback a real slap ...but what goes around comes around(cliche)... good writing! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beki: yeah, I thought so, too. Thanks!! ethome: yep. i know. Thanks!!  sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoy the read!!!!!!!!!!! |
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