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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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0 posted 2001-01-09 01:34 AM



When looking back through
               aged innocence
lilacs bloomed again in
               the morning
and there . . .
time's knowing eyes still
               remember
walking barefoot in love
               with you.

12/9/00

© Copyright 2001 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved
Lady Lightning
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1 posted 2001-01-09 01:40 AM


This is so sweet,  I could really see all the innocence in this..Made me smile ...Liked it much.... ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

VAS
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2 posted 2001-01-09 01:43 AM


This is splendid!!!  Oh, I like it so much.  It's the first of yours I've read since your very first post.  Looking forward to more!
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2001-01-09 03:36 AM


this is totally beautiful, Kraw...you are dancing in this one....can I hug ya thanks???
Nan
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4 posted 2001-01-09 07:01 AM


Barefoot and in love??? You've got MY attention... Nicely done, Krawdad..
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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5 posted 2001-01-09 01:54 PM


To go back just to hold his hand and have that innocence of love feeling once again. Thank you for bringing back that memory.
Krawdad
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6 posted 2001-01-10 02:48 PM


Lady L, VAS, Serenity, Nan, inot2B,
I appreciate your comments.  Glad you liked it.
This was one of those ideas that started out in one direction and ended up somewhere else and a surprise to boot.  No doubt you've been there.
Just one of the things I love about this medium!

/:^)==
=#==

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2001-01-20 02:01 AM


had this one dog-eared for a while..finally getting back to my dog-ears!     

this is a really sweet write kraw--barefoot in love..i love that!..enjoyed..  

hugs, g


"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

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