Black Chiffon And A Crushed Red Rose

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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2001-01-08 10:01 PM

~Black Chiffon And A Crushed Red Rose~
~~*~~
Moonbeams lightly caress
ivy and marble columns of white,
red roses on a table of glass
overflow with the scent of romance
~~*~~
Whirlpools in eyes of green mesmerize,
a captivating call from across the room,
eyes locked in an embracing gaze
~~*~~
Walking as in a dream,
surrounded by misty clouds
of black chiffon on ivory skin,
our heartbeats echo across the room,
a crushed red rose you place in my hand
as passions whisper of love touch wishing lips,

~no lonely night will haunt this night~

~BloomingRose~

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

1 posted 2001-01-08 10:06 PM

hard to resist a rose, or a poem as lovely as this.

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

2 posted 2001-01-08 10:08 PM

A very softly romantic and lovely read!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-01-08 10:19 PM

lovely images indeed Deb..a beautiful setting you have created..enjoyed

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-01-08 10:20 PM

BloomingRose~
Hello, sweet lady.
This is elegantly romantic.
Ya' just got a way about ya' !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2001-01-08 10:45 PM

Wow, this title pulled me right in, and the poem is so beautiful. Sounds like the perfect evening. Your images were flawless.
Sandra

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-01-09 12:19 PM

Moonbeams lightly caress
ivy and marble columns of white,
red roses on a table of glass
overflow with the scent of romance
~~*~~
Whirlpools in eyes of green mesmerize,
a captivating call from across the room,
eyes locked in an embracing gaze
----------------------

simply stunning Deb...superb imagery
very lovely romantic writing
jm

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

7 posted 2001-01-09 09:23 AM

Mike~ Thank you for stopping by glad you enjoyed

Koko~ Thank you, glad you liked it

~V~ ~ Glad you enjoyed. Thank you for reading

Marge~ Thank you

Romance is the spice of life!

Sandra~ Thank you much

JM~ Thank you, I know we all need a little romance, and I love to "create" my dreams

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

8 posted 2001-01-09 09:37 AM

Oh...I can see I have missed much from you Debra....what attention to detail in this piece. Lovely work

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-01-09 01:47 PM

"No lonely night will haunt this night."
Beautiful poetry...James

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

10 posted 2001-01-10 06:33 PM

Ruth~ I thank you for your nice comments. It's a real compliment coming from someone with your talent for writing, so I humbly thank you from my heart.

James~ Thank you kindly for stopping by to read.

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