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Amature2
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0 posted 2001-01-08 09:46 PM





Cyber Screen

We all meet in a Cyber Screen
Names of people we have never seen
Some responces are kind of loud
Words you'd expect in a Cyber crowd

Screen names come and Screen names go
We talk to people we don't even know
We talk as if we've known them long
Nobody thinks there's anything wrong

To some you let your feelings show
Some you don't even want to know
Yes even in a Cyber crowd
Those who'd not make mommy proud

We all come into Cyber Land
An hourglass without sand
Some wonder... Is this a Cyber Dream?
As we sit here by our Cyber Screen


© Copyright 2001 Amature2 - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-01-08 09:51 PM


Welcome to the wonderful world of cyberscreens, Amature2! I hope to read more from you.
1slick_lady
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2 posted 2001-01-08 09:55 PM


welcome to passions!!!!!.......I enjoyed your first poem (ever).......keep writing its good for the soul
KokoStewartKoomoa
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3 posted 2001-01-08 10:00 PM


congrats on your first poem ...write on... I enjoyed the thought expressed!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



EagleScorpion
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4 posted 2001-01-08 11:18 PM


quite impressive for a first time! I must say..
Krawdad
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5 posted 2001-01-08 11:48 PM


Welcome to the joint, I think (not long here myself).  "Cyber Screen" is an appropriate first post.  Good show!  A curious if not crazy place, this.
/:^)===
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Lady Lightning
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6 posted 2001-01-09 12:04 PM


Wonderful first ever post...Lol@ Krawdad..a most curious place that gets curiouser and curiouser , but such a lovely place to be...Amature2..you will grow to love this place and all the "crazy" people too... ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Amature2
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7 posted 2001-01-13 12:23 PM


Thank you for welcoming me to your Cyber Screen world, A K A the meeting place of the millenium. Thanks Amature2
dgvarner
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8 posted 2001-01-14 04:59 PM


hey there AMATURE..good to have you in cyber poetry land    great first post..hope to see more from you..you'll love this little corner of cyberland!

hugs, g  (aka dgvarner...  )

"a love declared for days to come, is as good as none" -tracy chapman

WinterTalon
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9 posted 2001-01-14 10:26 PM


Oh, that was awesome!  Absolultely awesome!
ethome
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10 posted 2001-01-15 03:18 AM


Welcome to Passions!  This is as good as anything out there....love the candid questions!
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