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Another Face
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Another Face |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Another Face I can look in the mirror, and see my reflection of one. But somewhere in the shadow, he's always there A haunting beauty casting whispers in the air. He's not of my own creation, I don't even know his name he sings to me in the darkness His voice familiar, the same. Did he come to me in another time Another life that used to be mine. Was he a Knight, and I a Lady in a different place? Or is he someone I know with another face. Were we secret lovers in a forbidden world of pain Does the mystery stir a memory of a mistress never tamed? Is he a legend in my dreams, with a touch I've always known? Am I caught in De'Je'Vu is he a ghost... ...or is he you? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hopefully. . . he's not a ghost. . .  wonderful Elise. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
What a lovely picture you paint of your hidden yearnings! Keep it up. The dog that trots around finds the bone. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i like this pondering of the shadows...  very nice write!hugs, g "there is no 'best' in a world of individuals" -unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
ooh, I adore this, especially that last line. And you know the answer, he was definitely somewhere in another time.. Luv, S |
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