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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-01-08 07:00 PM


Feelings Within.

I saw her deep in thought
A long time ago I remember
Her beauty rich and rare
At the time all I could do is stare
Each time she looked my way

She was the most beautiful girl
Her long brown hair
And soft gentle face
She seemed concerned, puzzled
But deep within I knew she was calm

I walked to the buffet bar
To freshen up with a coke
Sat down, watching the miles go by
Deep in the horizon, horses running free
My mind away from heaven's beauty

The feelings within
Took me away from home
My heart pounded away
Of thoughts lost many years ago
Feelings of love, real feelings

I rose from my seat
She was standing by the door
I walked by slowly
She was tall and so slim
Her beauty, made me want to hold her

Stepping down from the train
Paris was alive, I stepped by the phone
Looking across there she was
Staring straight at me
A smile which revealed so much
Appeared and filtered my heart
It was all I needed
From the most beautiful girl
I never got to meet



Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-01-08 07:50 PM


What a most beautiful memory to share with us...indeed, you saw the very best of beauty that day...
Daniel J D
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
2 posted 2001-01-08 08:02 PM


Sunshine,
A moment in life to treasure, beauty rich and rare, both inside and outside.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2001-01-08 08:32 PM


very neat daniel!  what a story... maybe..she felt the same about you.....

hugs, g


"there is no 'best' in a world of individuals"
-unknown


Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
4 posted 2001-01-08 09:51 PM


dvgarner,
Thank you, she was very special let me reassure you.


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
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Waikiki, Hawaii
5 posted 2001-01-08 10:03 PM


aww sweet memories expressed in this wonderful write! I enjoyed the thoughts!

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
6 posted 2001-01-08 10:03 PM


aww sweet memories expressed in this wonderful write! I enjoyed the thoughts!


Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
7 posted 2001-01-08 10:03 PM


aww sweet memories expressed in this wonderful write! I enjoyed the thoughts!


Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
8 posted 2001-01-08 10:05 PM


Daniel
Sweet memory...  Very beautifully penned...thank you for sharing.

take care,
Poeminister

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
9 posted 2001-01-08 10:26 PM


Koko,
Thank you, thank you, thank you.

Poeminister,
Cheers, your replies are always so great.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
10 posted 2001-01-08 11:19 PM


Daniel...this is  lovely memory to share with us...thank you
Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
11 posted 2001-01-09 06:50 PM


Paula,
Cheers, she was one to remember.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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