Open Poetry #11 |
Feelings Within. |
Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Feelings Within. I saw her deep in thought A long time ago I remember Her beauty rich and rare At the time all I could do is stare Each time she looked my way She was the most beautiful girl Her long brown hair And soft gentle face She seemed concerned, puzzled But deep within I knew she was calm I walked to the buffet bar To freshen up with a coke Sat down, watching the miles go by Deep in the horizon, horses running free My mind away from heaven's beauty The feelings within Took me away from home My heart pounded away Of thoughts lost many years ago Feelings of love, real feelings I rose from my seat She was standing by the door I walked by slowly She was tall and so slim Her beauty, made me want to hold her Stepping down from the train Paris was alive, I stepped by the phone Looking across there she was Staring straight at me A smile which revealed so much Appeared and filtered my heart It was all I needed From the most beautiful girl I never got to meet Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a most beautiful memory to share with us...indeed, you saw the very best of beauty that day... |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sunshine, A moment in life to treasure, beauty rich and rare, both inside and outside. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very neat daniel! what a story... maybe..she felt the same about you..... hugs, g "there is no 'best' in a world of individuals" -unknown |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
dvgarner, Thank you, she was very special let me reassure you. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
aww sweet memories expressed in this wonderful write! I enjoyed the thoughts! |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
aww sweet memories expressed in this wonderful write! I enjoyed the thoughts! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
aww sweet memories expressed in this wonderful write! I enjoyed the thoughts! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Daniel Sweet memory... Very beautifully penned...thank you for sharing. take care, Poeminister |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Koko, Thank you, thank you, thank you. Poeminister, Cheers, your replies are always so great. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Daniel...this is lovely memory to share with us...thank you |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Paula, Cheers, she was one to remember. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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