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maxtec1
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0 posted 2001-01-08 02:34 PM



Lovers Dance
By Richard Maxfield
10-5-2000

Into the night
Lovers dance
Holding close
Feel romance

Cheek to cheek
In arms so tight
United hearts
Taking flight

Through meadows
Moon light glows
Across the brooks
Where love flows

Star light twinkle
Shadows dance
Souls sigh
At a glance

Bubbling passion
Lips meet
Gliding on
Winged feet

Nimble fingers
Brush of skin
Lovers dance
Once again

© Copyright 2001 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-01-08 02:35 PM


ba-da-boom
ba-da-bing
heart sings!

gotta love it!

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2001-01-08 02:42 PM


Richard.......what can i say but....MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM !!!
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2001-01-08 03:28 PM


The title gave me a jolt..I've written about a 'Lovers Dance', but you can't read it unless you're 18.

This was simply divine!!!  

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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4 posted 2001-01-08 04:52 PM


Lovely poem, filled with the beautiful dance of romance.
Deb

Lady Lightning
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5 posted 2001-01-08 05:35 PM


Hey Richard...Wanna dance?  

Into the night
Lovers dance
Holding close
Feel romance

I got the music on , soft and slow...
This is lovely...simply lovely... ~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
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Waikiki, Hawaii
6 posted 2001-01-08 05:51 PM


Shadows in moonlight
So hauntingly romantic!
dancing in the dark

cast off all restraint
putting you on like a glove
all night Lambada


smiles...enjoyed this very much, as did all the rest...


aloha, my friend,




Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
7 posted 2001-01-08 09:51 PM


OH my what a great bunch of comments ladies. Your comments left me smiling.
Love and light,
Richard

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