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I Am (Challenge) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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I remember this challenge. I think it is good to do it again once in a while and compare it with the first ones written. It gives a chance to see how much has changed. Here goes..... I am driven and passionate. I wonder how others deal with intricate boundaries. I hear the night singing to me. I see fairies dusting the landscape. I want to roam free without consequence. I am driven and passionate. I pretend that I am a spellcaster. I feel like a fairie dusting the landscape. I touch the hearts of would be lovers. I worry that my heart settled too soon. I cry for all the pieces left behind. I am driven and passionate. I understand that I can only have one. I say soulmates don't always marry or love. I dream of overcoming my past. I try to supress myself in shyness. I hope that one day I won't have to anymore. I am driven and passionate Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I worry that my heart settled too soon. I cry for all the pieces left behind. ======================= I say soulmates don't always marry or love. ========================== I try to supress myself in shyness. I hope that one day I won't have to anymore. ======================= this is very revealing and honest... also very sincere ...written with the wisdom that comes from learning as we go...usually from our mistakes ... I see so many mirrors in this ... challenge very well done take care jm Am I loved by my words Will my vows weather the tide Bended knees can forsee all the rhythms of life And a heart can be held without pride ~Vante |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Temptress, Very well articulated. "I want to roam free without consequence. I am driven and passionate." Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hi Janet!  Thanks for replying to this, and taking time to single out parts that you see the most. Daniel, Thank you for reading. That is my favorite part also. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is excellent. . . a look inside. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Love it, wonderful! My favorite line: I worry that my heart settled too soon. that is a fantastic line!!!!!!!!!!*********** |
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