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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2001-01-07 04:13 PM

i am...a drifter
on a sea of dreams
i am...afraid
in a world of uncertainty
i am...sincere
honest and fair
i am...an open book
you may misinterpret
i am...deep
you may find me within
i am...darkness
where truth is present
i am...light
if you should stumble
i am...inspiration
if you seek to be inspired
i am...art
when i draw myself in
i am...contradiction
rebel and angel
i am...shy
but ever bold
i am...passion
i am...longing
i am...real
i am..poet
because i breathe

-dgvarner
1-7-01

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"there is no 'best' in a world of individuals"
-unknown

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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-01-07 04:38 PM

DG~
This is wonderfully well-done.

'i am...an open book
you may misinterpret'

As long as they read you ...
each page is open to interpretation ~
I LOVE IT !
My favorite line - wish I'da thunk it !

And this is super -

'i am...darkness
where truth is present
i am...light
if you should stumble'

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2001-01-07 05:12 PM

Oh, this is truly brilliant, DG......what a great write!!

Write on!
-<--<--{(@

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-01-07 06:27 PM

And such a fine poet, she is!
Awesome work of art, this poem, and its writer.
Sandra

*Majestria*
New Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 7

4 posted 2001-01-07 06:40 PM

You keep on with the good work. I like this poem because it reminds me of me. Beautifully done

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

5 posted 2001-01-07 07:34 PM

dgvarner,
Very well done, loved every line.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

6 posted 2001-01-07 07:55 PM

i am...contradiction
rebel and angel

hmmmm i'm not sure I know that part of you, but I like the rebel angel contradiction.
There is alot to you that doesn't meet the eye.

Parker

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2001-01-07 08:35 PM

an excellent presentation of yourself, dg...

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2001-01-07 08:42 PM

Dg,
bravo! well done!
write on
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

9 posted 2001-01-07 10:58 PM

Contradiction and misinterpretation are FUN things though and I have enjoyed both since knowing you. Well done my friend.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2001-01-08 12:10 PM

Dg~

I sure liked this.......the open book.....yes, I know that.......

very well written......I enjoyed this very much

-SEA

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

11 posted 2001-01-08 10:41 AM

MARGE..thank you! so glad you enjoyed those lines

always good to hear from you

SUNNY1..brilliant? wow..thanks!

CATALINA..thats so sweet..thank you!

MAJESTRIA..lol..you my twin?

thanks for reading!

thanks DANIEL! glad you stopped in!

PARKER..hmm..you dont huh? you havent been paying attention..

i am...a secret
you must seek to find...

BALLADEER..i thank you much

KETH..thank you friend poet

MARK..heres to FUN!

SEA..so glad you enjoyed reading me

(i'm THAT much of an 'open book' aye?? lol) i suppose all us poets have some chapters open for public reading dont we..

thanks all! hugs, g

"there is no 'best' in a world of individuals"
-unknown

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

12 posted 2001-01-08 11:24 PM

enjoyed the read..simply written but the images it conjured in this reader's mind were marvellous

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

13 posted 2001-01-09 03:28 AM

thank you KAILE

glad you enjoyed

hugs, g

"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

14 posted 2001-01-09 07:18 PM

DgV,
What a wonderful presentation of the terrific person that you are, Nice poem!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

15 posted 2001-01-10 04:58 AM

DgV,
You sound like a very interesting, multi-faceted person- who has a strong sense of self-yet some underscovered mystery as well. You are one who has a lot going for you, even as your poetry shows.
David

No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

16 posted 2001-01-10 10:26 AM

DEN..hey there my friend

thank you for your very sweet reply

DEN TWIN DAVID..

thank you so much for your reply as well! very thoughtful, very kind

hugs, g

"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

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