Open Poetry #11 |
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Back by no particular demand..............(#6) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London ![]() |
Put on the Coffee ~~~ Early one morning at the break of dawn all snug and warm my pajamas were gone ~ Like spoons in a drawer I snuggled in close she said let me up my kidneys afloat ~ The moment she left I drifted right off to sounds of the ocean its' breeze gentle soft ~ Welcome aboard the slumberland cruise lip locked with my wife who else would I choose ~ When I finally decided to surface for air a much younger wife stood next to me there ~ We were both young again with new fire in our stare her breath the sweet essence of fresh country air ~ With passions aroused we fled below deck into each each others arms my lips pressed to her neck ~ Her passion grew stronger her tongue did I taste her kisses were wet and covered my face ~ Her moans sounded odd and most out of place I opened my eyes our dogs' snout in my face ~ I guess I'm not needed came a laugh through my glower I'll put put on the coffee while you take a shower ~~~ |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
![]() This is fabulously funny Rex. I'm so glad you reposted it so I could smile before bed. Now I just hope I don't have this kind of dream. Hehe ![]() Thanks for the giggles ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ahhh Rex, yes I do remember this one and it's just as funny the second time round...thanks once again for posting it ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
ROFL ... I love your style Rex! Perfect story, wonderful flow ... and an ending that left me smiling from ear to ear (woke up that way this mornin' myself, LOL!) ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Sheri ... hey it's the best kind, but you need to keep your dog musseled overnight ![]() Tracie ... glad you liked it again thanks ![]() Hey Kit ... Maybe your dog and my dog should get together ... then perhaps they'll spare us their spit ![]() |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL ![]() Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Your welcome Denise ... I was thinking I might try writing some knee slappers again for a change of pace ![]() |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Oh MY...another smile and giggle I got here...hehe Got anymore? ![]() The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just as precious a reading as the first time around...still giggling...thinking of all the times MY dog has come between a hug or more... so I rent my grandkids for the weekend and keep the dog busy so I can get some rest! LOL!!! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Lady Lightning ... actually ... no shortage ... Joke poetry used to be my specialty ![]() Sunshine ... gotta love those grandkids ... they come in handy don't they? ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat piece...like the style |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Hi Rex, long time no read i had forgot about the end good suspense |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh was that cute! Miss your writing Rex. |
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