Open Poetry #11 |
Back by no particular demand..............(#6) |
Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Put on the Coffee ~~~ Early one morning at the break of dawn all snug and warm my pajamas were gone ~ Like spoons in a drawer I snuggled in close she said let me up my kidneys afloat ~ The moment she left I drifted right off to sounds of the ocean its' breeze gentle soft ~ Welcome aboard the slumberland cruise lip locked with my wife who else would I choose ~ When I finally decided to surface for air a much younger wife stood next to me there ~ We were both young again with new fire in our stare her breath the sweet essence of fresh country air ~ With passions aroused we fled below deck into each each others arms my lips pressed to her neck ~ Her passion grew stronger her tongue did I taste her kisses were wet and covered my face ~ Her moans sounded odd and most out of place I opened my eyes our dogs' snout in my face ~ I guess I'm not needed came a laugh through my glower I'll put put on the coffee while you take a shower ~~~ |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
This is fabulously funny Rex. I'm so glad you reposted it so I could smile before bed. Now I just hope I don't have this kind of dream. Hehe Thanks for the giggles ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ahhh Rex, yes I do remember this one and it's just as funny the second time round...thanks once again for posting it ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
ROFL ... I love your style Rex! Perfect story, wonderful flow ... and an ending that left me smiling from ear to ear (woke up that way this mornin' myself, LOL!) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Sheri ... hey it's the best kind, but you need to keep your dog musseled overnight Tracie ... glad you liked it again thanks Hey Kit ... Maybe your dog and my dog should get together ... then perhaps they'll spare us their spit |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL Thanks for the laugh, Rex!! Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Your welcome Denise ... I was thinking I might try writing some knee slappers again for a change of pace |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Oh MY...another smile and giggle I got here...hehe Got anymore? ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just as precious a reading as the first time around...still giggling...thinking of all the times MY dog has come between a hug or more... so I rent my grandkids for the weekend and keep the dog busy so I can get some rest! LOL!!! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Lady Lightning ... actually ... no shortage ... Joke poetry used to be my specialty Sunshine ... gotta love those grandkids ... they come in handy don't they? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat piece...like the style |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Hi Rex, long time no read i had forgot about the end good suspense |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh was that cute! Miss your writing Rex. |
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