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Corinne
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0 posted 2001-01-06 10:53 PM



Pacific

I have a secret stash of time
of value only to me,
a bank of imagery
engraved into interiors -
framed by mortal fragility.

Flashes I have captured
dwell in a core of light –
a place of innermost truth.
Someday, I'll restore them,
faded images from my youth.

From hills, golden in God's hands,
to fallow trees of winter
reminders of life, death's reality;
while the ocean's siren song
ceaselessly calls to me.

Learning to live with the ache
of love's separation,
alienation undermines –
stretches across and around
the distance it entwines.

With hues that outshine
the clarity of beryl,
a quintessential Celtic soul,
Pacific sends serenity
in waves that ever roll.

Others we embrace
so integral to self,
carried innate within -
free them, in return
create the cycle again.

© 2001 Corinne Bailey



© Copyright 2001 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
RobertB
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1 posted 2001-01-06 10:56 PM


ahhh Corinne.....I wish I lived by an ocean....any ocean.

I am not even near a pond

Robert

Corinne
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2 posted 2001-01-07 11:08 AM


Sometimes, Robert, it is more a state of mind than a geographic state.

Corinne

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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2001-01-07 11:29 AM


I love this.   Very good reading to begin my day with.  


Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?


Denise
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4 posted 2001-01-07 10:51 PM


Very nice, Corinne! I like the revision even better!

Denise

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