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Open Poetry #11

My Heart's Standing Still

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2001-01-06 09:54 PM

~My Heart's Standing Still~
*~*
My heart's standing still
searching for a rainbow,
maybe it's over there,
over the hill...

Running now
reaching the top
breathless,
I'm sure it's here!
somewhere...

I'll just wait,
they say if it rains,
a rainbow follows

It's dark now,
quiet night,
the full moon stares,
somehow he knows

He tosses me a star,
says to wait no more,
the fire of love
from a twinkling star
shines high above
a fading rainbow

BloomingRose

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-01-06 10:34 PM

BloomingRose~
What a lovely vision~

'It's dark now,
quiet night,
the full moon stares,
somehow he knows

He tosses me a star'

I just love the softness of your writes, my friend.
Now - catch a falling star !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-01-06 10:45 PM

the full moon stares,
somehow he knows

He tosses me a star,
says to wait no more,
the fire of love
from a twinkling star
shines high above
a fading rainbow
====================
beautiful Deb,
such lovely imagery and soft spoken emotions
very nice, indeed
take care
jm

Am I loved by my words
Will my vows weather the tide
Bended knees can forsee
all the rhythms of life
And a heart can be held without pride
~Vante

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2001-01-07 12:35 PM

This cowboy thinks that when you ran up that hill you touched a bit more than just a star my friend. This was absolutely wonderful in it's presentation and it's imagery. You are fast becoming one of the elite in your imagery and personalized style of writing my friend. Time for this one to go in the library.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

4 posted 2001-01-08 01:57 PM

Marge~ Thank you, your kindness shines again!

JM~ Thanks, glad you like it

Mark~ Thank you kind sir, your comments are always encouraging

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