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maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
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Garland, Tx

0 posted 2001-01-06 04:48 PM



I were a wonten ta asks ya
By Richard Maxfield
1-5-2001

I were a wonten to ask ya
If you were abligezed to
Go fer some fishen
And fun wit me

Im a hearen tha
Catfish aer a bitten
And shore wont
Ta catch some

Ifen you would lick to
We could meat by
Tha crick at sun up
And try our luck

I am a liken ya
Mor and mor
And a wonten tot a spend
Some time witch ya

I’ll broung a chicken by fridie
Fer ya ta ring its neck and to pluck
Ya can fri it fer us ta eat
On our fishen trip

I got 2 canr poles
Wit almost new hooks
Ifen ya dug some worms
Fer bait     12 dozen fat ones

My papie got some
New white lighten made
I’ll snuck some
To broung wit us

Ask your papie
Ifen we could use
His boat and motor
That old boat is tha pudderest thing

I seen ya picken
Okra tha other day
Ya were a looken good
Mighty good to my

I could hardly see your rash
Any mor like it was
And my lip fungus
Is a starten to clear up

Ifen them thar fish
Wont bit we can
Always kiss and hug
Under tha old oak

Ifen it gots to hot
We can go a skinney dipen
In tha crick after
Sippen some lighten

I learned sompen
Wit my toung
I shore to a wonten
Sho ya

I be a see ya saterday
At tha crick
Don’t ta forgot them
Worms and chicken


PS maw got a pacage from her friend vickie secrets and was a wonten me ta tell ya paw.
She told me ta tell him the moon is full over tha pond. I to ta know what she ment but if ya would tell ya paw.


© Copyright 2001 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
1 posted 2001-01-06 04:57 PM


Richard love, pardonnez moi? Parllez avec moi si'vous plait.
It was very very hard for me to read this love, I definitely need an interpreter. But from what I could understand it is wonderful love, it really is.
Love it
Take care
                Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2001-01-06 05:19 PM


Yus chor ar aplumer gud poet. Paw tels me no go fitching witch ya. Yus no wont to git fitches yus jus wonts in me britches.
PS Paw seys to tel ur ma he be a wating.

maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
3 posted 2001-01-06 05:40 PM


naw I wonten do that to ya. I wont some cat fish fer tha gumbo. I just wont ta use tha boat. ya cousson lets me a do that.
LOl this is so bad. i dont know what came over me but I had fun anyway.
Love and light,
Richard

Stan
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since 2001-01-01
Posts 120
Inland Empire Southern California
4 posted 2001-01-06 07:53 PM


This is American humor!  could be from enny party the kuntree.  Excellent exercise and I'll look for more.  Stan


maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
5 posted 2001-01-06 09:08 PM


Thanke Sten fer ya comment.
does ya have aney sisters.

LOl
Love and light,
Richard

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