Open Poetry #11 |
From Ember To Flame |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
From Ember To Flame ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~ ~The~ ~firey~ ~smolder~ ~just got bolder~ ~A lifeless ember of~ ~ashened-remember~ ~Sparking to life~ ~on new breeze~ ~of you~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Beautiful and enchanting . . . like the flame itself . . . LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* Marge....you have a fiery spirit..love it....love this flame. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl this is as always a delight. You are ever creative and always always wonderful And yes I love it too Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
As the flicker brightens in the intensity of the heart so does the glow upon the smile of those in it's luminance and wherein melting of two hearts now combine to feed a growing pattern of reflection to soften the darkness of the night. The dancing of the flame becomes the rythm tossing the swirls of minds aloft as their gazes lock in that moment of such realization that this is where that first spark was intended to find itself as it broke the silence of heartache and fueled the beginning of a new birthing to the love that two souls were created to exist as one from this moment to the ending of eternity |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. Thanks for letting me know. Charisma~ Awwww ! Thank you, my friend. Marsha~ *Hugs* to you for a sweet reply. MarkB~ You can fan my embers anytime ! The spirit of you - dances in the flame ! Have I told you today ? ... Well, I do ! Awesomely inspired reply, love. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like this smolder into flaming boulder. Lovely, sparkling, piece. Poeminister |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this one's HOT! fan the fire!!! watch it rise!! flamin' poetry here, girl! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, and I thought smokin' was supposed to be bad for ya. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it. Doreen~ LOVE those little flaming smiley's ! *On a side-note ... We are so dry here in Florida, that the raging brush fires have started again. Too close for comfort here. So maybe the smoke got in my eyes on this one. Kethry~ You sneaked in under a smoke-screen on me ! Thanks, gal. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-06-2001).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
The fire burns bright in this one Marge! May the flames ever burn images of poetry in the pages of your gifted mind. Love ya girl, Deb |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ not many have the talent to say so much with so few words, this is lovely....I do enjoy your words much..... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Glad you caught a glimpse of the roaring flame. GreenEyes~ I thank you so very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Margie~ This may be tiny, but it says a great deal Tracie~ Lovely flame sweetie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Glad I came back to find your sweet reply. Thank you sooooooo much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I can't believe I missed this one the first time Wonderful, Marge, you know how much I love shape poems - and you're the master of them Excellent thought within this, with a great presentation!~ Melissa~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
remember the ember |
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