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| Open Poetry #11 |
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Morning Sun |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Morning Sun To know again the morning sun seek thee me in the silk of day hold me in thy satin sway and lo then take my breath away in this whisper of your touch show then me the love of such as I would crave thee much caress me as if I were new and know then only me to you like a spray of young day's dew cherished are we in deep twilight caressed are we throughout dark night in our eyes see gleam of light know in soul of thy mighty chest this love that beats within my breast know this Sire, and take thy rest to know again the morning sun 01.06.01 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, didn't I say the sun would shine today, it is love, and it's coming from you. Utterly utterly excellant work. Absolutely stunning Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh*......just beautiful....love it. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karilea, a beautiful poem.. the morning suns are always the best. There's a feeling of contentment Now that you are here I feel satisfied I belong inside Your velvet heaven" Depeche mode |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The morning sun.. I find to be the best... the most introspective... most reflective... most juvenescent... most enlightening... I could go on and on... I love your rendition - You've said it beautifully, my Sunny friend..  |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Oh Oh Oh - Karilea - this is SO VERY beautiful I'm speechless - how do you exceed yourself with poem after poem? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all very much, and Mr. Yeats? I don't know that I do...but thank you... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh my, the morning sun lit a flame in your heart this day... love this one *smiles* Deb |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I love it. Beautiful writing... Poeminister |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hold me in thy satin sway and lo then take my breath away ==================== my, my, my, ... to be so sweetly inspired ... this is poetry in motion Sun, love the creative rhyme pattern and the format as well as the vocabulary ... beautiful poem of longing. jm Am I loved by my words Will my vows weather the tide Bended knees can forsee all the rhythms of life And a heart can be held without pride ~Vante |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, you do exceed and excell with each one. And this I've said before that you do, this is truly excellant. The earlier reply was a little 'triste', I thought and anyway this needs to stay near the top of the page. because it is a star. Take care love Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I just love the morning sun The way it smiles on every one Oh, what a mood it puts me in As it tells morning to begin and I just love the noonday sun The way it shines is so much fun! It puts the brilliance in my day Inviting me to come and play.. Then I just love the setting sun That signals day is finally done I softly smile and close my eyes Until the sun again will rise... again, Sunrise, your poems inspire...  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sunshiny girl this is truly beautiful, you have written of yourself...this is you sweetie, well penned ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, I will shine for you each and every day...even when a cloud may obliterate me...I am there... Thank you Charisma.... Brian, much to be said for sunsets...thank you... Nan, please go on and give us your rendition...we can't be without your smiles... Deb...the flame is always there...some see it, some do not...thank you!... thank you Poeminister... Janet Marie...aren't we all fortunate when inspiration strikes...I just wish mine would not do it in the shower!...lol...hugs... Marsha, what would I do without my nova queen....hugs.... 'Deer...you've given me a new name...thank you... Tracie, you are a sweetheart, thank you!... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You've brought tears to my eyes Karilea... This is so beautiful, tenderness and softness abound in your weave and it's a pleasure to sink into and just be...if only for a moment~ Swim in the weave...don't examine it~ |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
It's a beautiful day here too Sunshine, I've never seen a sky so blue...makes you want to smile and smile.. Hugs |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, no!!! I tell you that you inspire me and I get your name wrong!! Rise, shine, set, ray, glow....by any other name you are still the SUN!!! FORGIVE ME!!!!!!!!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
morning Sun. . .nice to see you as always. . . beautiful my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Oh, how I like this - 'To know again the morning sun seek thee me in the silk of day hold me in thy satin sway and lo then take my breath away' Such lovely verse shines forth. LOL @ Balladeer~ 'The SUN also RISES'! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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