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Open Poetry #11

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KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-01-06 02:21 AM

silver veil of mist
tiptoes over azure waves
melancholy night

fog horn’s mournful cry
silver mists on restless sea
searching for the shore

pale morning mist
reaching for the blue above
blankets sleeping earth

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Passion,imagination
  and intellect
    running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko


[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 01-06-2001).]

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

1 posted 2001-01-06 02:36 AM

Beautiful! Very nicely done.

Poeminister

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-01-06 04:31 AM

Beautiful scene and beautiful words to make it come to life even more....ethome

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

3 posted 2001-01-06 05:15 PM

I see you haiku.... and very very beautiful too.

Parker

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

4 posted 2001-01-06 11:42 PM

tjanks to all for your kind comments. I appreciate it.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

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