Open Poetry #11 |
. . .one single word |
Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
.....one single word Lady, all I have's a word to lay a gift before you... a word I'm sure you've never heard, though many must adore you. For you have qualities so rare that they in contrast all outshine rare jewels! And whate'er you wear, flowers fade beside your features fine. If I were rich and I could bring you rare perfumes, ...exotic pets, they'd just diminish in your view as more of old familiar nets. So, I'll come squarely to the point. I bring a word no rival can endure! A word that saints use to anoint, a word all maladies to cure! A word so powerful in scope that you must yield your very soul! A word that now I more than hope will win your heart and take its toll. And that one word for decades that I sought, ...and found at last! ...now I forgot. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Oh man...........I needed to know that word too. Darn it anyway. This was .......well in one word........."Fantasmagical". Loved it and you caught me with the ending. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ok..you got me on this one!! And you must know that I collect dictionaries..I have almost 100 of them..so if you need a word, I'll see if I can find it. |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
Ha Ha Gotcha! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OOOHHH...I know...it's, it's--- "serenity..." ROFL...HUMOR ME!!!!! love and smooches, (does bribery work?) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh you sneak you! You got me going with all these womderful poetic romantic lines and then you dumped me into the recycle bin... he he I loved ...I might know the word but I'd hate to be wrong...ethome |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
ROFL God I love a poem that surprises me in the end...you think you know where it's headed and then you get there and SHAZAAM! Good one STan |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Stan the Man...one look at her and you were rendered speechless....sigh... |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
Serenity, Beki, ethome and Sunshine, thank you all for the chance to tease you. I promise I won't do this to you again. (devious eyes lowered smile) |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Refreshing humor in this. Miss you around here! I am many. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe...love this! |
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