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The Journey
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The Journey |
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LilPeanut Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 26Pennsylvania, USA |
Gazing off into the distance, Where water meets the land. Tears stream from my face, As you've come to take my hand. These plans God made, At last, come true. Our lives joined as one, For fate has sought through. These tests of time, So hard to achieve, We've overstepped them, With the greatest of ease. Our souls once lost, Have now been found. With faith by our side, Our love, so profound. In each others arms, As destiny had planned. This journey sets sail, For our new found land. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LilPeanut~  I like this very much -SEA |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Sweet and lovely. Enjoyed it With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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LilPeanut Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 26Pennsylvania, USA |
SEA, Thank you so much for your thoughtfulness. May you have a beautiful week.Dragon, Thank you so much, I am glad you liked it. Have a wondeful week. Take Care! Kelly |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Lilpeanut I thought this poem was simple and sweet yet very heat-felt. Im glad the Journey was a sucess. Good luck in the future with your love. It makes me happy to feel love in the world. Take care, Lisa~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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