Open Poetry #11 |
Candy Cane Kisses |
SEA
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He said I give him Candy Cane kisses with lips soft and sweet he said I just melt him with pure sugary heat Not at all like honey~ he says I'm more a confection my Candy Cane kisses are pure perfection He says I pout so delicious as his knees hit the floor my Candy Cane kisses leave him begging for more ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-21-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh so cute, and with the holidays coming, most appropriate.... yummmm Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
perfect flow! I loved the title and the poem was a definitely a "treat" *smiles* -Tier |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well ya cant do no better than having him on his knees begging please ... very cute and festive sea-gator great rhyme too girlie-girl later-peppermint-gator jm |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very cute, indeed. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh..this is sooo sweet... i love it! hugs, dg "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yeah I agree with the rest this is just real cute!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, wonderful, I love this and you KNEW I would didn't you. Anything with sugar yes I know. Really love this one. and I like the idea of him saying pretty please. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Pure sweetness SEA! Love it! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now you said you wouldn't tell anyone that I actually dropped to my knees BEGGING for more!!!!!!!! Cheeeezzzzzz, how embarrassing!!! Oh well, it was worth it anyway. Hugs and "sugary kisses" back to you my sweet friend. |
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SEA
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Sunshine~ I am so ready for the hoildays! thanks Tiersdin~ glad you enjoyed this Janet~ always nice to have him on his knees thanks Dragonpoe~ thanks Dg~ I'm so glad you liked this Ethome~ cute is good Marsha~ thank you sweet friend...... Dovey~ hey you! thanks sweetie! Mark~ I'm sorry, I couldn't resist telling......you look so good when you beg.....makes me want to give that much more *smooch* -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Nice thing about your kisses is that they just a keep on hanging on my lips like a curl of passion on the limb of a well watered tree!!!!!! Come on baby, lay them on me all you want. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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~Mark~ say pretty please ~SEA~ ( Smooch, smooch, smooch ) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~OOoEee Sea!!! Nice one! *Peace. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I want a lil taste puhlease |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!?????????!!!!!!! |
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SEA
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Walt~ SMOOCH! Mark~ COME AND GET IT!!! ~SEA~ |
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SEA
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SpitFire~ thanks sweetie, sorry I didn't see you faster. -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Very cute poem. Enjoyed this much. Poeminister |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Back to the top...missed this one SEA...and it's just adorable and so endearing...smiles and hugs. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Yeah I gotta say this is realllllllllllll sweet.... SEA, this gets bumped back up hun, it's just "sooooooooo" cute Coco |
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SEA
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PM~ I'm glad you enjoyed this Serenity~ thanks for da bump smiles and hugs back to ya! Coco~ thank you for a bump too! glad you liked this. -SEA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a yummy and delicious poem,s weet friend, your gorgeous words are always sugar-coated with smiles and love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful write Susan...glad you shared |
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