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KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-01-05 08:03 AM





Last night, I found bliss
tucked inside your embrace.
I found one thousand dreams
dancing in your paradise eyes.
In the traces of your touch,
I found music.
And even after your were gone,
I found memories of your kisses
Whispering secrets in my ear.
Finding you
Discovery...the beauty of your soul
Realizing your Truth . . .
I found Love.
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Passion,imagination
  and intellect
    running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko
  



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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-01-05 03:18 PM


"The beauty of your soul."   Yes I love that moment when you began to see all the beauty withing the soul...James
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2001-01-05 03:59 PM


Wow!  that was definitely a good night and I like the way it ended up...cool down now and get ready for tonight.....hope you live through it!   ethome
KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
3 posted 2001-01-05 07:08 PM


James: thank you ...smiles yes the beauty is found within even more than without. The soul/muse is expressed in poems. Thanks for your remarks and support of my poems.


ethome: smiles... thanks for the way you make me feel that I just might be getting somewhere with my pen. It is sometimes hard to evaluate your own. I am often amazed at what I may like when I write and what others may enjoy when they read and perceive.
thanks much!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



maxtec1
Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
4 posted 2001-01-05 07:23 PM


I loved this. It brings a poemto mind I think I'll have to write. great job.
Love and lght,
Richard

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