Open Poetry #11 |
Finding Paradise |
KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Last night, I found bliss tucked inside your embrace. I found one thousand dreams dancing in your paradise eyes. In the traces of your touch, I found music. And even after your were gone, I found memories of your kisses Whispering secrets in my ear. Finding you Discovery...the beauty of your soul Realizing your Truth . . . I found Love. Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko [This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"The beauty of your soul." Yes I love that moment when you began to see all the beauty withing the soul...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! that was definitely a good night and I like the way it ended up...cool down now and get ready for tonight.....hope you live through it! ethome |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
James: thank you ...smiles yes the beauty is found within even more than without. The soul/muse is expressed in poems. Thanks for your remarks and support of my poems. ethome: smiles... thanks for the way you make me feel that I just might be getting somewhere with my pen. It is sometimes hard to evaluate your own. I am often amazed at what I may like when I write and what others may enjoy when they read and perceive. thanks much! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I loved this. It brings a poemto mind I think I'll have to write. great job. Love and lght, Richard |
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