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Open Poetry #11

Finding Paradise

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-01-05 08:03 AM

Last night, I found bliss
tucked inside your embrace.
I found one thousand dreams
dancing in your paradise eyes.
In the traces of your touch,
I found music.
And even after your were gone,
I found memories of your kisses
Whispering secrets in my ear.
Finding you
Discovery...the beauty of your soul
Realizing your Truth . . .
I found Love.

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Passion,imagination
  and intellect
    running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko


[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 01-05-2001).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-01-05 03:18 PM

"The beauty of your soul." Yes I love that moment when you began to see all the beauty withing the soul...James

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-01-05 03:59 PM

Wow! that was definitely a good night and I like the way it ended up...cool down now and get ready for tonight.....hope you live through it! ethome

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

3 posted 2001-01-05 07:08 PM

James: thank you ...smiles yes the beauty is found within even more than without. The soul/muse is expressed in poems. Thanks for your remarks and support of my poems.

ethome: smiles... thanks for the way you make me feel that I just might be getting somewhere with my pen. It is sometimes hard to evaluate your own. I am often amazed at what I may like when I write and what others may enjoy when they read and perceive.
thanks much!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

4 posted 2001-01-05 07:23 PM

I loved this. It brings a poemto mind I think I'll have to write. great job.
Love and lght,
Richard

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