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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-01-05 04:20 AM


Happiness


Once again I find myself watching
this woman that I barely know
thinking she is so naturally beautiful
and I wonder if she knows
all the beauty that she shows
in the brilliance of her sweet glow.

And I appreciate her beauty that I see
and the gentleness of her personality.
Maria you light up my world with your smile
so now I will linger for awhile
til happiness fills my heart
and time finds us apart.


Jameslee@January03,2001
forMaria


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1 posted 2001-01-05 05:45 AM


Maria...that's a beautiful name...and your happiness just jumped through the screen and touch ME...thank you...I enjoyed and hope that you continue to.
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2 posted 2001-01-05 05:50 AM


oh James I am so happy for you....wishing you and Maria a lot of love and warmth.

(((warm hugs)))
Charisma

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3 posted 2001-01-05 05:57 AM


Don't feel like the lone ranger on this one James. All of us guys have been infatuated with a woman that we barely know from one time or another. That feminine beauty has a tendency to get our attention when we least expect it! As things go in the stream of human consciousness some affect us more than others...we get connected! we're all connected somehow, some more than others... and when that special smile and eye to eye contact hits us lover fools heh heh we ain't in control of nothin then!
Loved this write James...ethome

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-01-05 03:27 PM


Serenity glad that happiness is in your life...I feel it growing from within me.
Charisma thank you so much.
ethome Maria has been a casual friend of mine for a long time.   She works in a restaurant I frequent and sometimes I write her a poem while I am there eating breakfast.
This one on a napkin and she is so sweet she always tells me to type a copy for her so she can put it on her wall...I have seen her beauty...she glows from her soul...James

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5 posted 2001-01-05 03:30 PM


*sigh* I love to read of someone's love. This was so soft and beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing it with me. Much love and hugs to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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6 posted 2001-01-05 05:18 PM


how lucky maria is..i worked in a restaurant when i was 17 and no one wrote me a poem or maybe i would of dated them haa..i never dated the customers..im sure she loves to see you walk in..and she will always remember you for that..i still remember an usher in a movie across the street..always wanted me to close the movie with him ..but i never did haa..he loved cherry sodas..

                    ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



brian madden
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7 posted 2001-01-05 05:33 PM


beautiful poem, and aren't those lingering moments where you are just enjoying the other person's beauty the best. well written James< !signature-->

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy


[This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 01-05-2001).]

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2001-01-07 02:28 PM


Thank you Startime, Victoria and brian.
Yes Startime I also enjoy reading of love and romance and admirations.
Victoria I always date the waitresses...ha...well I always try..
looks like you missed an opportunity.
brian yes it is fascinating to watch an interesting woman...James

Nate Dogg
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9 posted 2001-01-07 02:32 PM


Nice work Jimmy!

Nathan

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2001-01-09 05:29 AM


I appreciate it Nate...James
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11 posted 2001-01-09 05:32 PM


Like this much
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