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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-01-04 11:39 PM

Repost and redone from DP

This is my soliloquy
lots of hope and fantasy
tinged with touches of delusion
always loving an illusion.

Wanting that which cannot be
still my heart yearns to be free
chooses without my consent
so quickly this heart is lent.

Knocking, knocking, evermore
praying for an open door.
Question why my life is fraught,
turmoil all that I have wrought.

This is how my life's comprised
shreds of love and bounteous lies.
On and on I try again
in pursuit of happy ends.

Not sure if this applies, but its all I could come up with

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-01-04 11:45 PM

in pursuit of happiness, Moon..aren't we all?

{{huggzzz}} nicely done no matter in what form

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2001-01-05 08:12 AM

Cat,
the poem's great, the form needs a little work

write on, with song
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2001-01-05 08:17 AM

Sandra love, this is a truly wonderful rendition of your heart, utterly wonderful. Your write with such passion and so truly, I would say that this is excellant. Remember to take care of you love
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

4 posted 2001-01-05 08:43 AM

Sandra,
Beautiful as always. And as always, such sadness....I wish for you better days
Love, Elise

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2001-01-05 09:07 AM

Hugs to ya lady...everything applies, and it's all insight to each other...thanks for this lovely glimpse into you...nice write...

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2001-01-05 10:19 AM

If it is you then it applies and I personally enjoyed looking into you
through your words.  They confirm
what I already knew.........you are
a caring heart matched against the
world seeking just one that will
understand and accept the love you
have.  I know that you will find it
and you will find the happiness that
dreams are made of.  Beautiful write my
friend.

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