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Agust P
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since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

0 posted 2001-01-04 06:31 PM

WHY?

why did I meet you?
why did you see me?
and why did you have those blue eyes
in the moment I needed them?

why are you so far away?
and why are you “almost twenty one”?

“it’s a secret
babe
it’s a secret”

I don’t know what I was looking for
and I don’t know why

there is a secret
hidden in your blue eyes

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-01-04 07:31 PM

why good question....and mostly without getting any answer.

Charisma

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2001-01-04 08:20 PM

Agust P,
Well done, secrets, Why?

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

3 posted 2001-01-04 08:32 PM

Agust, a splendid write you share with us today and I thank you for this enjoyable read...

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

4 posted 2001-01-05 04:06 AM

Thank you so much Charisma and Daniel J D and CocoBaci. You give me the energy to keep on improving myself AP

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

5 posted 2001-01-05 04:27 AM

"why"....A question that we ponder often

...The last verse of your poem was
beautiful and completed your weave in grand
style...Welcome to Passions (sorry to be so
late in doing that...shame on me!) I know
that I'll continue to enjoy your writing
very much...so nice to have you here~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2001-01-05 05:36 AM

I really like your style Agust---more of these, please!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2001-01-05 05:39 AM

Oh I think you really knew what you were looking for right there in your heart....well written I enjoyed it! Welcome to Passions!

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

8 posted 2001-01-05 11:41 AM

thanks to you Butterflies_dont_cry, what a warm greeting and thank you serenity and ethome for your nice comments, AP

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

9 posted 2001-01-06 02:28 PM

Beautiful imagery and nice poem!

Nathan

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

10 posted 2001-01-06 04:07 PM

I quit asking why a long time ago and just try to accept things as they come and go. It is not always easy but then again......nothing about a relationship ever is. Wonderful write.

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 01-06-2001).]

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

11 posted 2001-01-07 04:30 AM

thank you so much Nate Dogg for your comment and thank you Mark Bohannan, I really appreciate your comments and your right about asking why, I think we know the answers somewhere deep inside, AP

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