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I Am...Nakedthoughts
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I Am...Nakedthoughts |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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"I AM" challenge I am the essence of you, in the presence of me. I wonder if my dreams treasured in hold, shall see reality. I hear your voice calling within the storms that rage in my night. I see your shadow beckoning me to collide in pleasures delight. I want, I need, I desire the always of your decree. I am the essence of you, in the presence of me. I pretend in waters surround, you enter and freeze me to your press. I feel you always touching my mind, shaping, molding, I acquiesce. I touch your touch, wrapping myself within reflections flamed by candle light. I worry that this is but a dream, to be snuffed out each night. I cry the moment your whispers leave me weakened with no guarantee. I am the essence of you, in the presence of me. I understand your love for me is true and must trust in your word. I say what my heart desires in expressions to you only, heard. I dream of the day when words of love shall not be distanced any more. I try each morning to hold onto the memory of each breath shared before. I hope that the heavens above hear my nightly plea. I am the essence of you, in the presence of me. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Wynter, A challenge you have accepted, and a challenge you have captured. You just get better and better. Keep them coming. BC |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 You have portrayed yourself quite romantically.... In that we all share in this common need to be loved, I commend your thoughts expressed completely. Bob <>< |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very gracefully penned, Wynter. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely wynter..you met the challenge wonderfully  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
BC...I think I have a "fan" in you..and the breeze of warmth keeps Wynter from freezing... thank you  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Naked--Beautifully done. Poeminister |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Wonderful writing. i loved it. Love and light, Richard |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful. As I read this, your self-revelation, I became more aware of something about me. My hopes and dreams do not hold much existence in this world, this side of life. They are more sure in the other side of life. I guess I don't think there's going to be much in this world that will come to me again. And yet, I do have so many blessings to be thankful for...just don't expect anymore tender touches and sweet words whispered in my ears. And when I go here, to this place in my thoughts, I am sorrow. So I will go away from them and pretend human love doesn't matter. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
WYNTER, I'm so happy I got a chance to read your post... Ya know sweetie, there are some feelings in here that I can relate to and you have penned this I AM exquisitely... I dunno about you but I have found this challenge of 'finally' opening up an incredible experience... What I found difficult and still do is to read what one writes in the moments before and I guess that's the process of learning about oneself and facing the feelings buried within the heart... Hugs2U Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, how I love a romantic poem This is lovely I like the repetition of your theme Liz |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wynter...wonderful presentation who you are....and I love it.....excellent penned my friend ((hugs)) Charisma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You are romantically nice...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
LH/Bob, love IS what makes the world go 'round and I don't believe there can ever be too much... thank youMartie, thank you very much for your kindness...in responding ~Victoria, you know how I DO love a challenge thank you...~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wynter, you truly are thoughtfully naked in this exposing write write on, in song Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Poeminister & Richard thank you both ..I thought it was a fun challenge..and had no idea where I would go with it..it is amazing the different takes on this challenge..*s~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautifully spoken my friend. I am glad that you took the challenge and ran with it. This was an enjoyable read and I especially liked your line "I am the essence of you, in the presence of me. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
VAS - don't pretend human love doesnt matter..it matters almost more than anything else in life, at least I think so...huggzz and thanks for your words *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
How very wonderfully you met the challenge. This is pure and very heartfelt. I loved the read. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Coco- thank you, yes I loved this challenge..I thought it would be harder..but once I started it just poured out *s thank you for the huggzz...some days they are needed more than others. Liz & Charisma-thank youboth for reading and responding...each one of us penned such different thoughts..I was surprised by the many feelings we each revealed. huggzz to you both ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
James-hmmm romantically nice...sweetly said by you..thank you Kethry- yes sometimes I do feel a bit naked in my writings Mark- "I am the essence of you, in the presence of me." I have no idea where that came from..but that was the beginning of my thought process on this challenge..and I tried to stay with the theme..there is so much more to me..but I think I expose more than enough..as Kethry has pointed out Startime- thank you..yes heartfelt it was and I am glad we all joined in on this challenge Thank you once again...~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!! You have done a wonderful job with this challenge. Beautiful thoughts indeed...well penned Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Tracie, thank you for the WOW..I rarely feel those but yours came across strong..*s huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good to come back here and read an oldie |
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