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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Your whispers linger, dance with me again here and now Reflected in candle light seduction entwines with the silk touch of your fingers drinking in soft lavender skin Enter my dreams, Glissade your arms around my waist, let me hold close all your layers, drawing together the edges of fingers sliding together with mine , feeling your hand across my back connecting sensual skin to the deeper touch of gentle passion Man of soft ecstasy Pleasure is midnight love under moonlight as the misty haze streams in curtains of gold satin from cloud tops Xanadu is love dancing in your arms Dance me again ***< !signature--> "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 01-04-2001).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Greeneyes, Very romantic, and most sensual. I liked this very much, as the closeness could be felt while reading this. BC |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
A scene such - that I would give all I own to be a part of! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Glissade your arms around my waist, let me hold close all your layers, drawing together the edges of fingers sliding together with mine , feeling your hand across my back connecting sensual skin to the deeper touch of gentle passion very beautiful and with such warmth GE.. *Softsmiles* ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it....sweet romance inhere. Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your whispers linger, dance with me again here and now Reflected in candle light seduction entwines with the silk touch of your fingers drinking in soft lavender skin =============== Glissade your arms around my waist, let me hold close all your layers, =================== Pleasure is midnight love under moonlight as the misty haze streams in curtains of gold satin from cloud tops ================== WOW .... GE this is enchanting and so very lovely ... softly sensual and simply beautiful written like a whispered dream wonderful, love seeing this side of your poetry. take care jm Am I loved by my words Will my vows weather the tide Bended knees can forsee all the rhythms of life And a heart can be held without pride ~Vante |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written..and lovely thoughts lauren.. enjoyed very much  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: This is what it's all about. . . beautiful. . . simply beautiful. . . --------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 01-04-2001).] |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Wonderfully passionate poem greeneyes Well done Rich |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Lovely, lovely, lovely. I cannot help but comment on your usage of glissade ... perfect ! Really enjoyed this read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
Hello GE This is real poetry. Anyone could read this and identify themselves with your wish to relive a spellbinding incident in your life. Kubla Khan's pleasure garden is adorned further by your mastery of words. |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
Hello GE This is real poetry. Anyone could read this and identify themselves with your wish to relive a spellbinding incident in your life. Kubla Khan's pleasure garden is adorned further by your mastery of words. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Breathtaking! Wow! I love this! Very well written! Denise |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill C~ the closeness was felt, awww I appreciate your words, thank you... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill...Xanadu my friend can belong to anyone, *S* < !signature-->thank you for letting me know how you enjoyed my words, with such kindness...you are most appreciated..... Be well Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
nakdthoughts~ love the name (yours) and thanks for enjoying one of my favorite lines as well... Hope your holidays were wonderful....with peaceGreeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Charisma~ a memory to never forget....thank you for taking time to read one of mine... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
JanetMarie~ I am always so touched by your words and responses....I get that little soft er side in me every now and then.... always I thank you for reading, it makes writing worth the effort.... Hugs to you...be wellGreeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ I enjoy when you stop by, thank you...and again I thank you for the help with my page... < !signature-->Sven~ the memories, and the dreams make the dance worth while....your comments are much apprciated my friend... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Spiked~ thank you fot telling me you enjoyed this, it's appreciated... < !signature-->Marge~ thank you for the compliment....and for reading and responding as you do... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Stan~ Thank you for such a compliment, and for replying as kindly as you did..... dsnyder~ for peeking in to read my words, I thank you... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now this is a poet's poem for sure. Of course it will have to go into my library and I must add that it is not only my favorite of yours but it is now one of my all time favorites. Your tone and style through out the whole piece was fabulous. Okay....let's just say I loved it. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Mark what a wonderful compliment, thank you much....really glad you enjoyed my little dance....tis a memory to always remember.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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